PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
When I first met Harold, he was a Mars Bar and I resembled Baby Ruth.
“I will walk, run, kayak, bicycle, and crunch beside you,” Harold promised. And he did.
Soon I was a streamlined Butterfinger.
Harold handed me a brochure about an unwrapped convention in Sardinia.
“Don’t you want to show off that beautiful new body of yours?” he asked.
We melted on Sardinia’s pristine beach, eyes closed, our slick bodies gleaming.
“Howdy do, neighbors.”
Looking up, Harold and I saw KitKat and Twix.
Later, in their suite, we rolled in a bowl-shaped bed as if it were Halloween.
[100 words]
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the snappy host of Friday Fictioneers.
Tao Talk 
lol, sweet metaphors…
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:) Thanks!
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This made me laugh. Good one. (K)
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I’m glad it made you laugh, Kerfe :) It made me laugh to write it.
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That one is very clever! I like that one a lot Lisa.
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Thanks, Max. I had fun with it :)
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That was a supremely clever, Lisa. Great job. I loved it. :)
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Happy you enjoyed my tale, David, thanks :)
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Nicely used the image as a metaphor for life.
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Sadje, thank you :)
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You’re most welcome
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They were all in a bowl? Oh my!
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:)
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Such a tasty and lascivious write! ;-)
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Indeed! ;)
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😋
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Brilliant Lisa, I’m off to find a Mars bar!
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:)
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Sweet! In more ways than one, Lisa!
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Thanks, Jen :)
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This was such a delightfully imaginative piece!
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Dahlia, thank you :)
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Hahaha! You’re a wild woman, Lisa!
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I had a blast with it. :)
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me likey! What fun! I could go for a Baby Ruth– it’s been years!
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I never met a chocolate bar I didn’t like. I avoid them these days but the memory is so sweet :)
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It’s amazing what chocolate bars can do! :-)
I generally don’t indulge in sweets but certain chocolate bars I like!
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LOL. What’s your favorite chocolate bar?
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Duplo crisp sticks. The company that makes them also makes Nutella, the chocolate spread I grew up with. I still think it’s yummy, also as an ingredient, but it’s very sweet. Nowadays I can only tolerate limited amounts of sweetness at a time, at least when it comes to nutrition!😀
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Haven’t tried those but have had Nutella. I bought it and put it on graham crackers but had to stop doing that. It’s like food crack!
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😆
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That was quite a romp. Very clever. I love it.
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Thank you :)
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I love it. So clever. :D
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:) Thanks!
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Dear Lisa,
Very clever story. Now I’m hungry for chocolate. ;)
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, thanks much!
Shalom,
Lisa
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you did it again. what a cute little story. :)
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Thanks, Plaridel :)
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Fun … Fun … and Funny 😀
Let’s not forget very clever.
I loved this one … Isadora 😎
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Isadora, the first thing I thought of seeing all of that candy was to write a story with the candy as characters. Thanks much :)
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Laughing here – thanks Lisa 😄
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My work here is done :)
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😃
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Amazing premise. Hope they didn’t melt on the beach :)
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:) Thanks!
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When you are covered in chocolate, life is sweet.
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Some say the streets of heaven are paved with gold, but I hope there are rivers of chocolate :)
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.. and lots of chocolate fountains and chocolate flowing over falls.
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I had a giggle at this one. And then I contemplate a trip to the local sweet shop, and… Great take!
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Oh to have such a sweet shop to visit! :) Thank you.
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Oooooo saucy take… or sugary haha
I love the descriptions here…
And why am I suddenly hungry ? 🤔
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LOL Laurie, thank you :)
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I loved the halloween reference. This was a sweet treat story!
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Thanks, T. Last year I wrote a serial Halloween story during the month of October. My favorite holiday.
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That sounds like fun… and its halloween next month.
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This is so cute and clever! I’ve written about many inanimate objects but this takes the cake…or chocolate bar! Loved it!
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Fleur, thanks much :)
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This one FUN!!!!
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:) Glad you enjoyed it, Na’ama. Thank you.
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A very clever and imaginative piece. It made me chuckle. Well done, Lisa!
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Thank you :)
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Delicious! (lol)
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:)
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Very cleverly done, Lisa.
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Adele, thank you :)
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Oh my! 😳 That was a little naughty. Alternate title: Chocolate Unwrapped.
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Thanks, that works :)
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Lol Li :D this is so good!
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Thank you :)
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