Writober Day 3 — Bats

bats

bats
squeaky
night gliders
juicy moths taste
good

good
graveyard
shift workers
clear pesty cloud
skies

skies
speckled
against moon
dark silhouettes
dance

dance
midnight’s
sweet music
in banquet of
life

lanturne form
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Maria Berg is the host for Writober.

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  1. Great spooky fun! I love it!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Colleen. Bats have gotten such a bad rap but they’re such beneficial little critters!

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      1. But they’re way better outside than flying in my house in the middle of the night.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          And I’m sure the bats think the same of us humans: they’re better off inside than wreaking chaos in our house. Just kidding, kinda…

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  2. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    excellent poem Li :-) good work!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you! Glad you like :)

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  3. marialberg's avatar marialberg says:

    Fun combination of loop poetry with the lantern form. Yay!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Maria, a new form: Loop Lanturne!

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  4. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Graveyard shift workers–exactly! (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thanks, K!

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  5. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Thats a celebration of bats! Awesome!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you, Max! I love the little critters — as long as they keep their distance from me.

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

        We used to have them across our road growing up…we would throw rocks up…NOT at them…but they would dive at the rocks…never bothered us…

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I used to like to be outside at dusk when they start to come out. Now I’m tucked safely in the house by dark.

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          1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

            You know…they never came near us…even at dark…but they loved those rocks.
            Yea I wouldn’t want to take a chance now though.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              They seem like gentle creatures just trying to get by.

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  6. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

    very seasonal and enjoyable! We need to protect our little bat friends.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Randy, I’m glad you’re a friend to bats :)

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      1. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

        I used to have a bat box but it’s not possible to have one where we live now. They are in trouble as you know, I’m glad there is research going on to help with what I think its called White Nose fungus or something?

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I heard about that. I think there is a colony somewhere in MI that has escaped it and they are trying to figure out why. I hope they do so they can help the little critters. They are so helpless when it comes to humans :(

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          1. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

            Very interesting about that colony in MI. There is a study that was testing bat boxes and it seems they are not the culprits for spreading the disease apparently.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              They carry it themselves. I just read the fungus doesn’t kill them outright, it just makes them wake up in winter and burn their fat stores and they end up starving to death. Makes me sick. Brought in from NY in 2006 per the article I read.

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              1. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

                Sounds horrible! I sorry I didn’t explain that study very well. I should have said that they found that the bat boxes were not a point of transfer. There was concern the boxes could be part of the problem but thankfully it appears not to be the case so far anyway.

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        2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I have 2 bat boxes, but I’ve never seen bats in them. I don’t think they have been put up high enough to the bats’ liking.

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          1. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

            They are particular, when the girls were growing up we’d go lie on the car hood and watch the bats at night. Hard to find that many in one spot in the city now.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              The article I just read said that 90% of the bats in the UP are gone :( That’s effing depressing.

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              1. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

                That’s devastating

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  7. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Very effective form Li for your poem. Lovely

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje :)

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        It’s always a pleasure

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