24 SSPC 5 (1st wk) — First Frost (Soukou) (Oct 23 – Nov 6)

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ripe kousa dogwood fruit clings;
pudgy, dotted red geometric spheres
stubborn, they dare first frost’s fingers.
laughing on dry mulch, fallen friends
(are) disinterested in season’s test

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Note:  the Cornus Kousa (kousa dogwood) is not a native to the U.S., but there are two of them growing at my dentist’s office, right outside the door.  This does give a “twist” on kigo, but since these are alive and well here in Michigan where I’m at, I think they qualify to be added to my kigo list.

kigo: ripe kousa dogwood fruit, first frost
Gogyohka form
Colleen Chesebro is the host of Tanka Tuesday.

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  1. D.L. Finn, Author's avatar D.L. Finn, Author says:

    Nice, I love when our dogwoods get those red berries!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      D.L., do you eat the fruit?? I ate one and it tasted good. Not the skin and watch out for seeds.

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      1. D.L. Finn, Author's avatar D.L. Finn, Author says:

        I never have eaten it. I will have to see if our variety is edible.

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  2. Your poem is lovely, Lisa! Yummy red berries 🍒.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I want to plant some of these trees for the yard. We (the other critters and I) could share them :)

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      1. What a lovely idea, Lisa.😊

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  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Oh what a lovely poem Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome Li 💜

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  4. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    This made me smile, I love the idea that the fruit dares the frost – bring it!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you, Paul!

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      1. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

        My pleasure Lisa :)

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  5. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Lovely in all ways. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you, K.

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  6. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Of course everyone else used that word too–but it is.

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  7. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    When I first saw it…I thought it was dragon fruit…but then I look it up…nope. I never had dogwood fruit before…I never heard of it. We must have them here.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It’s a fruit that tastes good, but the skin is inedible, there are grape-sized seeds, and there isn’t much to eat. Nice for a treat.

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

        I’ll have to look around for some.

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  8. Gwen M. Plano's avatar Gwen M. Plano says:

    Lovely, Lisa! The red berries hang beautifully, and you’ve captured that well. 😊

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Gwen :)

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  9. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    We’ve got this srub/tree up the street. They are a pain to walk on… so I do try to avoid them on the sidewalk. :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      OH I can imagine they would be a slippery hazard to walk on!

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        We’ve got someone who I think has some kind of pear tree that they don’t clean up after – what a mess. At least the house that has crab apple trees – they mostly fall in their yard.

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  10. willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 says:

    Great feel to this 💜💜🍁🍁

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Willow, thank you <3

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  11. Lisa, this is brilliant! I didn’t know dogwood had fruit. They almost look like a strawberry, don’t they? What a great kigo! Well done!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Colleen they do have a strawberry gummy look to them. More like a peach inside. Thank you :)

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      1. It’s a great kigo word. Very unusual!

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  12. they dare first frost’s fingers.

    Lisa, your use of personification is masterful…

    <3
    David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      David, thank you, friend.

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  13. Smitha V's avatar Smitha V says:

    Such a beautiful picture, Lisa. Your poem is lovely, Haven’t seen dogwood in our part of the world. Looks like a strawberry. How does it taste?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      The inside is sweet and pulpy, like a peach. Not much to it really, it would take a lot of them to equal the insides of one peach.

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      1. Smitha V's avatar Smitha V says:

        Oh, ok. That’s a good description. I kind of get the idea. 🙂

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