season calls (tanka)

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taken 2 years ago. spoonville trail running along/through golf course in nunica

 

Still, woodland clearing
geese rise, through millennia,
when the season calls
our steps quicken to beat dusk
our short breath puffs of white mist

 

video shot at Blandford Nature Center last weekend, which inspired the tanka

 

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  1. geese rise, through millennia,

    gorgeous framing, Lisa <3

    ~David

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  2. lesleyscoble's avatar lesleyscoble says:

    My favourite sight and sound are geese rising 🧡 Utterly beautiful poem.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Lesley, thank you and I love the sight and sound also.

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      1. lesleyscoble's avatar lesleyscoble says:

        I love seeing the geese fly overhead. The sight and sound is wonderful at dusk. 🧡

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  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    This is a beautiful video and poem

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sadje, thank you. I was in the right place at the right time :)

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        And had the presence of mind too record it. 🥰

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  4. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    wonderful Li :-)

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  5. Eugi's avatar Eugi says:

    Beautiful pairing of words and scenes, Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Eugi, thank you :)

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      1. Eugi's avatar Eugi says:

        My pleasure, Li.

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  6. Nice poem, Lisa. I also like your video!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Christian. Will be over to listen to The Sunday Six in a few minutes :)

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      1. Sorry, Lisa, my hiatus started Friday since I knew I wouldn’t have enough time to put together my weekly Saturday and Sunday posts!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          You are forgiven ;) No worries, my friend.

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  7. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Nice poem Lisa…are those geese in the background noise?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes, it was them calling that got my attention. Not easy to see them through the trees but I followed them as far as I could with the phone camera :) Thank you.

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  8. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    It is definitely calling. (K)

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  9. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    Just this weekend on the way to family – the sky was full of geese. Some stay here.

    It was frosty, but spring came for a visit today it is 73F at 3p!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Omigosh 73F. Yes! I know you’re enjoying it.

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        Dipping down this weekend… brrr.

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