#FF — The Deadline Games

FF 112223 baretz-2023PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Cut rock and cement walls dominate, where blue sky feels almost like an afterthought. It’s a place that reason says is uninhabitable for humans – a perfect place for The Games.

Those who haven’t paid Lifetax by deadline are vaporized en mass each midnight. National lotteries choose contestants from those who have.

Lazy drone eyes watch today’s batch of contestants toddling down the chute, their images then broadcast on screens of casinos and other gambling establishments. Bets are placed and business is brisk.

Adversaries range from battle androids to enhanced zebras. It keeps things fresh.

Odds are slim, but some survive.

[100 words]

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the illuminating host of Friday Fictioneers.

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  1. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    A clinical iteration of some rather savage customs. Of course, it could never happen here… or… :) Good one.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sandra, thank you, the story wrote itself.

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  2. I remember The Running Man and I basically like every Arnold Schwarzenegger movie. Your story reminded me more of The Hunger Games movies.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Jim. It’s kind of a hybrid of a lot of dystopic movies and I can see The Hunger Games in there as well.

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  3. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Ummmm… remind me of where this is so I can avoid it all costs!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      lol I don’t blame you, Dale.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      If we don’t outright blow up or poison ourselves out of existence, overpopulation is going to effect drastic measures to cull us down. One of the stories in Margaret Atwood’s newest book discusses a way she thinks it could happen.

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      1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

        I was just telling David after he wrote about friends not wanting to have children in such a dark world, that Zero Population Growth was a very big issue when I was young, but you never hear about it any more. Had we bought into it 50 years ago (not just China, who went a little overboard), the world might not be in such dire straits today. We can’t support the amount of people on this planet now, and it will only get worse.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I can understand David’s friends conclusion and I wondered if I would ever have grandchildren. Then, in the middle of Covid no less, my younger son and his wife decided to conceive a child. The world dark, but who better to bring light than new life. If we could only convince each human to jump on board ZPG we might still have a chance to save our planet…

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  4. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    That sounds like something real in todays world.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I hesitate but agree with you :(

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

        I love that movie by the way.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Me too. Have watched it many times. We may have had it on VHS.

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  5. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly says:

    Great way to take the prompt!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Iain, thanks much :)

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  6. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Very interesting story

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) I tried to make light of the situation but also tell the truth. Thank you, Sadje.

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  7. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug says:

    It’s a sad reflection of our reality when our fiction so often takes us to dystopia. Well told.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Good point, Nobbin. It could have just as well been they were toddling down the chute to meet up with their sworn enemies for peace talks.

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  8. I immediately thought of The Squid Game. Hopefully, this will not become the Olympics of the future. A great take, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Keith. I haven’t seen that but you’re the 2nd person in 2 days to mention it. Maybe I should?

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  9. Dear Lisa,

    Chilling little story and too believable for comfort. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rochelle, thanks much. Back with The Running Man was made, it was set in the future of 2017. It is chilling how much it predicted has come to pass.
      Shalom,
      Lisa

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  10. Margaret's avatar Margaret says:

    Oo. That’s an unexpected take on the prompt. Chilling. I note with interest Nobbin’s comment above, and your reply. I do love futuristic fiction, positive or negative. I think we all feel worried about what our own future might hold. I hope it doesn’t hold such events as your story suggests. Very good story, nonetheless.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Margaret, thank you for your thoughtful comment.

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  11. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites says:

    Weird how as humans we seem to like these ‘to the death’ challenges, but in reality and in fiction. There are many such stories.
    Maybe in the end, this sort of thing is no less humane than the population crunches nature applies.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Agreed, Jen, survivalist themes draw us in. Is it because maybe we feel under attack from so many directions that we are hoping to see how others survive and it may trigger a way for us to? Just thinking out loud here. We like to think we are civilized but the leopard in the jungle has simply changed its spots.

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  12. Cold, calculating, ruthless …. much like life and the hell that’s going on in Israel.
    Very well done, Lisa. As usual.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Nancy, thank you. Writing is a safe way to vent.

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  13. A dystopian story reminiscent of roman times. Sadly this seems very plausible to me.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I see reality TV as part of that roman times mindset as well. We demand more and more outrageous battles between contestants just like they did.

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  14. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell says:

    Highlighting the separation of emotion from death and overcrowding. A scary proposition. Death games for entertainment and money. The hunger games of taxes

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks for reading and your comment, Laurie.

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  15. I’m with Keith, I too thought of Squid Games. I think that movie like your story, sadly, may be more realistic than we’d like. Good one, Jade.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Isadora.

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  16. An intriguing and different take on the prompt.

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