dVerse — Poetics — Rough Old Gal

bright moon screenshot-2024-03-25-112644Photo by John McKaveney: Bright Moon
(used with permission)

Rough Old Gal

Pockmarked and balding
she spins in flux through
sunshines and shadows.

She’s a rough old gal
a steady satellite
I’ve learned to
hitch my rope to.

She’s got my back.

This-here John fella
snapped
her in her glory.

Isn’t it funny how we love
to cover up and mask
ourselves, but with her
we want to see it all.

Lillian is today’s host for dVerse’ Poetics.  Lillian has shared 4 excellent photos taken by John McKaveney, a friend of hers.  The challenge today is to choose one of the photos and write a poem.

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  1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    I love it, Lisa. But… we never see her backside!! :>)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Wow, Dwight, I learned something new today. I thought the album name “Dark Side of the Moon” was just a relative thing to the seasons but so strange the same side always faces us. Now I have something new to ponder.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        Ha ha… the key is alway leave a little mystery to ponder!

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  2. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

    “Pockmarked and balding“– the gal takes a beating and keeps on spinning, and we just can’t get enough of this “steady satellite.” Love your take on the prompt, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dora, she is like an old friend. I remember walking with her as a kid and thinking she was walking alongside me.

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      1. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

        I remember the same as a kid, that feeling of being watched over. Something most children have felt I imagine. But what a gift!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          A shared experience that builds community.

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          1. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

            Love that. No small miracle in a world that needs such miracles.

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  3. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Great tribute… the tides thank you.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Max.

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  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A very realistic look at the moon.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Sadje!

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        My pleasure 😊

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  5. And still at times, she shields herself behind the shadow of ourselves…

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  6. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love your down-to-earth view of the ‘Rough Old Gal’, Lisa! You made me smile at her ‘pockmarked and balding’ – she is indeed ‘a steady satellite’ we want to see in all her glory.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks so much, Kim <3

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa!

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  7. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons says:

    What a fun poem, Lisa. Glad this here John fella gave us this photo to inspire you to write it!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thanks, Judy. Me too!

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  8. lillian's avatar lillian says:

    LOVE the easy manner of this poem….”pockmarked and balding” yep. And including John in the poem in such a conversational way…ending with a question too. Almost a conversational tone to it! Love it!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I feel a great affection for Lady Luna. To see her up close like this inspired the poem. Thank you, Lillian, and thanks again to John for letting us write to his images.

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  9. glyn40wilton's avatar glyn40wilton says:

    So, it’s not a MAN in the moon. It’s a WOMAN :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Correctamundo, or he’s very trickily dressed ;)

      p.s. I will get to your MMB this week but still playing catchup on prompts.

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  10. Helen's avatar Helen says:

    Know full well I should not ‘go’ there … I could not stop comparing myself to her. Great write, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Helen, she is my mirror, so please see her beauty. Thank you so much.

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  11. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    The moon’s rough surface is part of her charm…(K)

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  12. Like all rough old girls, she always has your back when it counts.

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  13. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    Full moons are best, but any piece of the moon is good too! I was just reading about something concerning the moon… that if possible humans might mine oxygen from her… that is beneath her crust. She just gives and gives. Even as she moves further away from us.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jules, I learned from Dwight that she only shows one half of herself to us. Now I’m learning from you she is moving further away from us. So fascinating to think the moon can be a source of oxygen for earthlings.

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        I guess I didn’t get the whole story… but I looked this up – so it might be right after all.
        I had realized a long time ago that the moon didn’t rotate since I always seemed to see the same image on full moon nights – the face or Bunny ;) But on a Star Talk with Neil DeGrasse Tyson that was confirmed.

        “It is theoretically possible to make oxygen on the Moon”, says Karen Sende Osen, who is a Senior Research Scientist at SINTEF. “The lunar surface is covered in sand composed of metals and oxygen”, says Olsen. “If we can extract the oxygen from this sand, it can be used by astronauts to breathe”, she says.Jan 19, 2023

        As far as the moon moving; “… Laser ranging measurements of the change in the distance from the Earth to the Moon tell us that the Moon is moving away from the Earth at a rate of about 3.78 cm per year.” So just a little bit.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Thanks for filling in details, Jules. Much appreciated. I have to wonder if the moon sand is composed of O2 what the other component(s) is/are. And if we extract the O2 from the sand, what does it become (curious chemists want to know.) About the movement, 3.78 cm/yr doesn’t seem too alarming, but what do I know ;)

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          1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

            I think many, many human generations may pass through… We (as a whole) aren’t that old in this universe.

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  14. Ooh! I love it, Li. She is good old gal. ❤️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Punam, she sure is <3

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  15. V. Sparrow's avatar V. Sparrow says:

    This is hands-down fabulous!!!

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      1. V. Sparrow's avatar V. Sparrow says:

        You’re most welcome!!

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  16. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    She is our beautiful muse after all!

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  17. I love your description of the moon!🌕

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Why thank ya, ma’am :)

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