#FF — Portal

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Portal

On our daily lunch walk, we passed a faerie tree.

Most people regard faeries as Tom-thumb-sized sprites who flit meadows and ponds like fireflies. Some know that faeries have mischievous spirits, so it’s best not to antagonize them thus earning their ire.

Dale, stop a minute. I want to snap a pic.”

As I did, Dale noticed something.

Look!”

She was pointing to a shadow at the tree’s crook.

It wasn’t a stain. A human form was sliding down the bark, until it disappeared into what I can only guess was a soul portal.

Another faerie fact worth noting!

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Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the literate host of Friday Fictioneers.

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  1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Love it. Plus, you made Dale a girl so, that’s always a plus ;-) And usually, it’s me making people stop whilst I take photos ;-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dale is you in the story. Imagining us taking a walk together :)

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        I didn’t dare assume… ;-) Love it. We would be stop and go all the way! Oh look! Wait. Gotta snap this! Did you see that?

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          My kind of walk :)

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          1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

            As you know… Definitely my kind, too 😉

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  2. Yes! That mark on the tree looks like a monkey to me. LOL! 😂

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Maybe it’s a monkey soul? ;)

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      1. Ohhh… could be. Faeries are shape-shifters, so that would make sense too!

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  3. Neil MacDonald's avatar neilmacdon says:

    Another sighting of the toast Jesus. huh?

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  4. randydafoe's avatar randydafoe says:

    These things are good to know!

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  5. elmowrites's avatar elmowrites says:

    Ooh, this feels like a begining!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It may be! Thanks, Jen :)

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  6. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Just in time for Thursday doors…(K)

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  7. Indeed, good to keep in mind. A clever tale with faerie lore, Lisa. My favorite kind.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Brenda!

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  8. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Cool fantasy story…or was it?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      With faeries, you just never know! ;)

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  9. Wow! Very fascinating. Soul portal – I wish I could find one.

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  10. So very cool! This reminds me of a movie we happened on the other night, quite a bizarre version of A Midsummer Night’s Dream, a B&W oldie with a young Mickey Rooney as a faerie! Great story, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Mickey Rooney as a faerie, that’s priceless! It’s possible I saw that as a kid and tucked it away in my memory banks? Was Mickey a villain faerie in it?

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      1. Haha! No, he was the mischievous Puck but surely not a villain. It was a very trippy movie!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Sounds like it, Nancy. Did you ever see the Twilight Zone episode he was in, where he was in a room and grew bigger and bigger? That was a trip also.

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          1. Yikes! No … I’m sure I would have remembered that one! My hubs is a TZ fan, more than me; I’ll have to ask him if he remembers.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              Max, at PowerPop blog (my best blogging buddy) wrote up every single episode of it. Here’s the write-up and a clip. S5 E5:

              Twilight Zone – The Last Night of a Jockey

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              1. After reading that, I have to watch the episode. I never really cared for Mickey Rooney as a child actor; I found him obnoxious and unattractive. However, his acting skills were impressive, especially when he got older and was faced with playing desperate characters such as this one.

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                1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

                  :) Sounds like a plan, Nancy.

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  11. CGraith's avatar CGraith says:

    A perfectly weaved story tutorial on faeries!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Clare, thanks much.

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  12. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Very intriguing story

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        My pleasure

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  13. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    Quite a mystical tale! A soul portal is an interesting concept… “to be continued”?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Steve. I think when we leave our bodies our souls have to go somewhere, and what’s the route? Why the heck not faeries as the keepers of the portal? ;) Not sure if it will be continued. You never know…

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        Why the heck not, indeed!

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  14. oh that is a tale I’ll think twice about in the woods when I say I’m not a believer, Li.. lol💓😹

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Cindy, if you don’t knock on wood immediately after saying it, watch out ;)

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      1. hahahaha… I bet. Now I’m scared❣️😂🥹

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  15. Patricia Clair's avatar Patricia Clair says:

    I love the faerie theme, and now I am going have to do some research on soul portals! Looking forward to going down that rabbit hole (or is it a faerie hole?) – thank you!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      You’re welcome, Patricia. I just made soul portal up, but if you find anything out there on them, please share it :)

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  16. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    so it’s not just my imagination. i can actually see the face in the trunk. :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I think if it is your imagination, it is a “group hallucination” that others have also “imagined” including me. I have a picture of an old tree that I swear looks like a person climbing out of it.

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Check this out and let me know what you think:

      dVerse OLN — Redemption

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  17. Margaret's avatar Margaret says:

    Great use of the prompt. I like the idea of a ‘soul portal’ – and the way an everyday ‘lunchtime walk’ turns into something otherworldly. Well told.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Margaret thanks much for reading and your comment :)

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  18. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Every lunchtime walk should turn into something worldly whether something worldy actually happens or we let our imaginations run. I love that you pulled Dale into the story. You two would have so much fun snapping photos!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Alicia, you’re so right on both counts. Thank you!

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  19. The above comment is mine! I forgot to click the icon that identifies me.

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  20. michael1148humphris's avatar michael1148humphris says:

    A great use of the prompt, soul portal’s is a fascinating concept

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Michael. A concept to think about developing perhaps.

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  21. We still have a lot to learn about faeries!

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  22. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell says:

    Ooooooooo
    Creepy and magical. I am fascinated !

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Happy I piqued your fascination, Laurie :)

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  23. Dear Lisa,

    Leave it to Dale to pick up details others don’t always see. Enchanting and intriguing story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rochelle, thanks so much.
      Shalom,
      Lisa

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      1. You are very welcome, Lisa. 😊

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  24. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    That human form sliding down the tree was really a great picture in my mind! Love that you included Dale :)

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    1. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

      That last comment is Granonine. Forgot to sign in.

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glad you liked those aspects of the story, Linda :)

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