dVerse — OLN 363 — “I see dead people.”

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I see dead people.

on the screen
then in my dreams
babies sprawled,
unable to crawl
beyond nursing
parents cursing
children’s infanticide
endpoint stratified
soon en-graved
prayers unsaved

there can be no victory in this
spite; parents’ grieving last kisses
vengeful extinguishing innocents
too many eyes crying in heaven
too many hollow sockets put to rest

I see dead people.” — from The Sixth Sense (1999)

top image link by © 2024 Mohammed Salem/Reuters

I am today’s host of dVerse’ OpenLinkNight. I say:
Please link up one of your poems or write to one of the optional prompts given.  I chose one of the given movie titles to use as a title for my poem.

71 Comments

  1. That one said its message clearly……..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Ain. Also want to let you know I haven’t found a way to comment on your poems from where you are posting, but I have been reading them. Today’s really touched my heart :(

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      1. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

        None of us have been able to comment on Ain’s posts…

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Hoping he gets back to us to let us know how to comment.

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    Heart-breaking, Lisa. I don’t want to see them, but they are constantly there, on the television news, in the papers, on the internet – and rightly so. We must not ignore them.

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  3. Brendan's avatar Brendan says:

    The reportage of daily atrocities quells to a troubling murmur. Hiroshima, Gaza mon amour.

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  4. that final line is so visceral

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  5. Quite intense, thank you.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      You’re welcome, Chris. I wish it wasn’t so.

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  6. It’s hard to have words for the horrifying, and yet you’ve done it and done it so well, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jennifer thank you. I understand about no words about some things :(

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  7. scotthastiepoet's avatar scotthastiepoet says:

    Great write… The notion of vengefulness extinguishing innocence is a very powerful and your close of ‘too many hollow sockets put to rest’ is a great one

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Scott, many thanks for your sensitive feedback.

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  8. Debi's avatar Debi says:

    There aren’t words enough to speak of all the pain, sorrow, tragedy of those horrific acts.

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  9. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    We have all been forced to see dead people in a way we had believed we had grown beyond – both in Ukraine and Gaza and other places around the world and your poem crystalises the feelings so strongly, Lisa…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Andrew, well-said. Thank you for your insightful comment.

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  10. Sadje/ Sadie's avatar Sadje says:

    Oh this is so heartbreaking Li. And very true too.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sadje, I wish it wasn’t so :(

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      1. Sadje/ Sadie's avatar Sadje says:

        Me too. But we can’t close our eyes to this reality

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          1. Sadje/ Sadie's avatar Sadje says:

            🙏🏼

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  11. Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES's avatar Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES says:

    Gripping and hard to bear.

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  12. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    That is a hard read…and it should be.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :(

      I got your email. Will answer soon.

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  13. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

    Wow. Exactly. It haunts me every single day. “Hollow” is the word 👌🏼

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It is an unthinkable reality to me and haunts me too.

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  14. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    Too many dead people…sigh…

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  15. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Way to much of it. And no end in sight. (K)

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  16. Well, judging from the comments, I don’t see my pingback. So I’ll try it this way.

    Here’s my attempt. I hope I did it right. Tell me what you think.

    dVerse — OLN 363 — Toto I’ve A Feeling We’re Not In Kansas Anymore

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Heartland Echoes, I clicked approved on all 3 of your messages but they did not show up in Mr. Linky, so I manually added your post there. Haven’t read it yet, but it is now in Mr. Linky. Another unsolved WP Mystery :)

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      1. Okay. Thank you 🤗 Wp now a days seems to have their own mind, it seems.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          You’re welcome :)

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  17. This gutted me, Lisa. No words tonight. 😔

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  18. It’s heartbreaking to see the innocent lives taken away, Lisa!

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  19. Oh my, Lisa, this is so emotional and compelling.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Robbie, I was watching “Democracy Now!” earlier this week, where 2 members of major US aid/food networks that are trying to get it to Gaza have recently resigned because of false reports that Israel isn’t blocking their efforts. WHAT A SHAME. On Israel and on US. They showed babies and toddlers as described in my poem, doomed even if given food now. I can’t get their images out of my head.

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      1. How absolutely dreadful. I can’t bear suffering by children and animals.

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  20. An intriguing prompt.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Welcome, Robbie. Thank you :)

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      1. My pleasure, Lisa.

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  21. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Lordy… you went for the jugular on this one. Fabulously, might I add.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dale, what I saw earlier this week has been haunting me. This is a way to process it. Thank you and appreciate your support <3

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        This is a good way to do so. 🤗

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  22. Sometimes you just have to call it like you see it Li and this is one of them. Well composed and so sad a sign of our times. 🤗💗

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Cindy, dear, thank you <3

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      1. Oh but of course💗

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  23. glyn40wilton's avatar glyn40wilton says:

    Sad but true in many aspects

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Glyn, children being allowed to starve anywhere is an act of war. When it is allowed in your own country, it’s also domestic terrorism. I’ve seen things here in the US while I was working that would haunt your nightmares, and I’m positive it’s still going on :(

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  24. Bella's avatar Belladonna says:

    Oh wow!!! You’ve expressed this quite well 🥹

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Belladonna, thank you.

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  25. Very well put; the words and the header image.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Gia, thank you. Hard to put into words but words it needs to be put into.

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  26. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Indeed “no victory”

    Just pain to every side

    much🤍love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Gillena, the reality of your comment should be obvious to all with eyes in their heads and hearts beating in their chests, but they seem blinded by monstrous agendas :(

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  27. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

    Haunting lines, Lisa, of broken bodies and lives, where “there can be no victory in this/spite.”

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  28. Ali Grimshaw's avatar Ali Grimshaw says:

    It is beyond sad.

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  29. MYLOVE's avatar MYLOVE says:

    Ineffable

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