dVerse — Poetics — Sarah Poem

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Love as hard as you can. Write the stuff that matters to you, but also, maybe stuff that doesn’t matter too much – just have fun. Life is going to throw all sorts of things at you – remember that the small, beautiful moments can carry as much weight as the big terrible ones. And you can’t avoid bad things, but you can make a point of treasuring the good things.  — Sarah Connor

Sarah Poem

She will leave.
In her place, a vacuum;
emptiness like space.

Her star’s implosion
will leave a black hole,
a sucking wound.

Yet, she will stay,
bright embers,
sacred remnants
of her living days.

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Kim is today’s host of dVerse’ Poetics. Kim says: write a tribute poem for long-time dVerse host, Sarah Connor.

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  1. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    This is written so beautifully: Yet, she will stay,
    bright embers,
    sacred remnants
    of her living days.

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  2. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

    Yes, all this, Li. 💙💙

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  3. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love that your introduced your poem by quoting Sarah’s words, Lisa, and your poem is gorgeous, especially:
    ‘Her star’s implosion
    will leave a black hole’
    and’…she will stay,
    bright embers,
    sacred remnants
    of her living days’.
    Now I’m welling up again.

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  4. This is gorgeous, Lisa. I love the last three lines. What a way to be remembered!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      My understanding is that the poems will be given to Sarah’s family. I had that in mind as I wrote it.

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  5. Brendan's avatar Brendan says:

    For the sacred remnants Sarah gives us, and you share here, thanks.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Brendan, thank you; you’re welcome.

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  6. That is indeed a beautiful line. And Sarah has created and sparked our imaginations. Such a gift.

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  7. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    She leaves us a rich legacy. (K)

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  8. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    Absolutely stunning poem Lisa :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Carol Anne.

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  9. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    A beautiful tribute poem to Sarah, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dwight, thank you. Very difficult to find the words :(

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        I know what you mean. You are welcome

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  10. Always two sides of the veil…

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  11. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin says:

    so beautiful. How well you wrote this, dear Lisa. Xo 🥹

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Selma thank you very much.

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  12. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    A wonderful tribute to your fellow poet.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Steve, thank you.

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa.

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  13. A loving tribute for Sarah. Leaving bright embers and sacred remnants…how wonderful that is!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Di, thanks very much <3

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  14. destiny's avatar Destiny says:

    beautiful, Lisa 🤍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Destiny, thank you <3

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      1. destiny's avatar Destiny says:

        so welcome 🤍

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  15. Sunshine's avatar Sunshine says:

    Awesome 👍

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  16. Such a beautiful tribute, Li.❤️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Punam, thank you <3

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      1. You are welcome. ❤️

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  17. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Deep feeling tribute. Bravo.

    Thanks for dropping by my blog.

    much♡love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Gillena <3

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  18. Hi Lisa, this is a beautiful tribute to your friend.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Robbie, thank you. I’ve written a lot of good poems inspired by Sarah’s prompts and have enjoyed so many of her offerings.

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      1. It is very sad. Hugs.

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  19. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi says:

    Gorgeous, gorgeous write Lisa! 💖💖

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sanaa, thanks so much <3

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  20. Suzanne's avatar Suzanne says:

    I’ve been reading many of the poems written in response of Kim’s moving prompt. They are all beautiful. This one bought tears to my eyes. Those bright embers will glow brightly for a long time.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Suzanne, yes they will <3

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  21. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Such a beautiful and moving tribute 🥰😍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Sadje.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  22. Oh, Li, I’m crying here. This is beautiful.

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  23. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 says:

    Beautiful, powerful.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, C4Y2.

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  24. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    Lovely poem Lisa…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Max!

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  25. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    Truly lovely, Lisa…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Andrew, thank you.

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  26. a very moving tribute Lisa – Sarah’s poetry is such a missing piece from our dVerse gatherings

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Laura, thank you, and agreed :(

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  27. Mish's avatar Mish says:

    Powerful. Peaceful. Truth.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Mish thanks, friend.

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  28. Cyber Brust's avatar Cyber Brust says:

    🇵🇰🤟💔❤️💕🥀

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  29. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

    “bright embers,
    sacred remnants
    of her living days.”
    So beautifully spoken, Lisa, just as her poetry.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Dora. Indeed <3

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  30. Kritika Maheshwari's avatar Kritika says:

    This is a beautiful poem.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Kritika.

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  31. Jaskaran Singh's avatar Jaskaran Singh says:

    Good one, @msjadeli. It catches the soul within a body.😊😊🤩🤩

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Jaskaran, thank you <3

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