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Four and Twenty
Ralph’s smooth features contort through surprise, excitement, and calculation.
It’s not a good look on him she thinks.
“Don’t worry your pretty head about it, dear.”
“Gina, are you sure?”
Why did I wait so long to be worshiped by a dumb, sexy God?
“I’m sure. Now go to the bedroom and get ready.”
~ ~ ~
Preparations of a different sort take place over the next few days. The bread machine cranks out many crusts, which are popped into the deep freeze to wait. Knives are sharpened.
Harold fills twenty-four.
The soup kitchen is delighted with the surprise donation.
[100 words]
This is the third and final part to the story. I hope you’ve enjoyed reading it as much as I’ve enjoyed writing it.
Read Part 1 here.
Read Part 2 here.
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.
Tao Talk 
I can’t help but think this has sinister undertones
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Neil, I’d be worried if you didn’t think that. Thanks :)
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Sounds pretty dark, Lisa! :-)
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I hope you weren’t looking for a happy ending, Christian ;)
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I kind of figured there wouldn’t be a happy end!😀
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I guess compared to what he did, what she did is exponentially worse. I hope they get some good detectives on the case.
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Definitely creepy. What inspired this ending? (K)
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Good question! I’ve been watching some dark stuff on netflix and think it has an influence. “Only the shadow knows…”
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I had a feeling this one would be dark…. and no one could guess that ending.
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Max, yesterday even I never would have guessed that ending! I toyed with mercy, letting bygones be bygones, etc — but rejected them. :::evil laughter echoing:::
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lol… well you know I’m dark so i don’t mind….
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Max, you are a loyal fan of my writing. I know you don’t mind dark, especially after your “Texas Chainsaw Massacre” write up :)
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LOL…
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Oh, I can guess what you haven’t written. 😱
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:) Thanks, Sadje. A gruesome tale indeed.
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You’re welcome ☺️
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My pies were sinister, too.
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Just read it. Gruesome to the nth!
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Methinks Harold deserved punishment… but this is a tad extreme.
How long will Gina be happy with a dumb, sexy god?
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I think Gina is not a very nice person. I wanted to show how an initial impression of victimhood can flip in a chilling way. Also, I wanted to flip the script with traditionally male and female roles.
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I think Gina is far from a nice person.
You succeeded brilliantly!
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Dale, thank you. 3 parts is enough to tell a pretty good story.
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Absolutely! 300 words giving us all sorts of scenarios possible until you gave us the official one :)
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I’ll have to o back….I’ve forgotten the rest of the story!
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Dark and gruesome. You’ve sustained the story well.
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Sandra, thanks much. I tried.
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This did not end well. What a wrap up!
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Thanks much, Angela.
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Your warning was warranted! That was certainly not the ending I expected! A great three-parter, Lisa.
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Thanks much, Keith. I enjoyed writing this three-parter.
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Oo. That was a gruesome plan. She wasn’t going to just walk quietly away then, was she. Revenge was what she wanted. Chilling ending.
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Margaret, I’m not sure why she did it. It may have been for more practical reasons. Thank you for reading and your comment.
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A chilling ending woven so well, as usual, Lisa. Well done! :)
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Thanks much, Brenda :)
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Ba! What an end to your little tale. Poor Harold…nicely done. 24 pies? Not bad conservation haha eeeew
You set this up well.
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lol! Love your comment, Laurie. Thanks!
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Pretty dark and twisted.
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It’s a real mess isn’t it.
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Dear Lisa,
Does this mean ‘the secret’s in the sauce’? Dark and creepy. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, you could definitely say that. :) Thanks a lot.
Shalom,
Lisa
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Creepy story.
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Indeed. Thanks, Dawn!
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