dVerse — Q208 — By Pale Screen Light

poem by pale screen light

By Pale Screen Light


In days of old
from neck was drained,
sucked from punctures,
to pale, hungry undeath.
In flush refrain, now
fantasy, foddered myth.

Yet modern vampires still exist.

We stare into their
pixelled eyes,
minds jammed
through cable and wifi,
keyboarding evermore
into drooling golems.

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Dora is today’s host for dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. In celebration of Dora’s daughter’s novel being published, today’s word to write a 44-words-total poem (not including title) is vampire.

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  1. I thought about that Sting song, but I have used it so many time before, but my poem was a still a bit inspired by that song.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I have the album its on (an excellent album) and have listened to it many times. Cool to learn you have used it many times before and based your poem on it. I like this version as he is backed by a full orchestra. Love that howl at the end :)

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love the phrase ‘pale, hungry undeath’, Lisa, and the image in the second stanza – a familiar one!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Kim :)

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa!

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  3. Nice vampire poem. I like the link to energy draining technology

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Robbie, I couldn’t help but think of the connection to it. We’re all being drained :( Thank you.

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      1. Yes, we are all being drained.

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  4. Dora's avatar dorahak says:

    Willing victims, aren’t we, to those “pixelled eyes,” to our everlasting shame?! The second stanza’s indictment rings all too true.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I’m not so sure how willing we are over time. Just like the heroin addict pulling out the kit as we boot up our machines :(

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  5. Ha! Well done, do very true, and you liked them in at the first stanza before the hit

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  6. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 says:

    I need less screen time…..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Nolcha, I’m trying to taper off, but not at all easy.

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      1. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 says:

        Not easy at all. An awful addiction. Or, maybe writing is the addiction.

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  7. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    OMG

    This is so scary

    much🤍love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Gillena.

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  8. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Wonderful imagery you have evoked. We are fascinated by them, aren’t we?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dale, thanks. Yes, like a moth to a flame :(

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  9. Such truth in the closing lines. Nicely done Jade.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Maria, thanks much.

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  10. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Ha! That’s the new reality

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It sure is! Have you seen the movie, “The Matrix”? I see it kind of like those pods.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        Yes, a few times 😛

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  11. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    A very clever verse, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Steve, thanks much :)

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  12. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    That is the truth. (K)

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  13. Rob Kistner's avatar Rob Kistner says:

    So excellent Lisa, and I love the perspective. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rob, thanks much, buddy :)

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  14. I did enjoy the parrallels, very apt!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Di. The crackling truth of the times.

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  15. “minds jammed / through cable and wifi,” – excellent reference to one of the vampiric powers mentioned in earlier vampire lore, but not always included in more recent iterations of the lore.

    Fantastic poem, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Nicole, please say more about the “vampiric powers mentions in earlier vampire lore” will you? Thanks and glad you liked the poem.

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      1. In the novel Dracula, vampires have hypnotic and telepathic abilities, using mesmerizing gazes to entrance their victims.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          Oh ok, I see where you’re coming from. That’s a hella good novel. One of the few I’ve read more than once. Have you seen the HBO series, True Blood? In it, they call it “glamouring.”

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          1. No, I haven’t. But I’ve heard that term used in connection to fae illusionary magic.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

              That must be where they got it from.

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  16. Lisa, your poem cleverly reimagines the timeless allure of vampires through the lens of our digital age, blending old fears with modern realities. You truly never disappoint :-D

    ~David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      David, high praise. Thanks for the kind words.

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  17. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons says:

    Although I don’t like scary movies, I have always been fascinated by vampires..so I identify with your poem, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Judy, I understand the (morbid?) fascination with them.

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  18. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    I am not a fan of horror films generally but vampire films are a special category which express some deep human aspect, Li – well captured…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Andrew thank you.

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  19. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

    Well-done, Li, with the allure of vampires and the connection to modern technology draining people.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Merril.

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      1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

        You’re welcome, Li!

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  20. Gotta love, ‘drooling golems’!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) :::pardon me while I dab my chin:::

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  21. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    Keyboarding evermore … grim reality in a disconnected world – the irony and the self doubt – who is the vampire really is the question this poses for me.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Paul. Perhaps we are the Draculas and the screens are the Renfields?

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