This and That Are One
Merging libidos
Fusion-powered ecstasy
Illuminates us
Pulsing new in old darkness
Forming new clay from old dust
~Warning: over-fired vessels flare~
Sun’s trajectory
Burns toward imminent dusk
Here, under a starless sky
Cold blows over shattered bits
Dissolved in pools of hot tears
puente form poem (with tanka)
Robbie Cheadle is today’s host of TankaTuesday. Robbie says:
This week we are writing a Tanka Puente with the theme of best and worst moments.
Tao Talk 
Lisa I loved what you did here, awesome! 😘😘
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So happy you enjoyed the poem, thank you <3
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Beautifully done, Lisa
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Thank you, Robbie :)
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Excellent poetry Li
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Sadje, thank you, my friend.
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Most welcome dear friend
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A lot going on here !
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It is emotionally wrought isn’t it. :)
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I wasn’t sure where you were going with it, but truthfully, that’s a good deal in a write like that.
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I really like this Lisa …the at oneness with the universe 💜💜💜
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Willow so happy you enjoyed <3
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Thank you 💜💜😀
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You’re welcome.
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it’s all one and the same. How very intuitive. I agree. Lovely poetry. Very well done. Blessings
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Selma, thanks much <3
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How beautiful, Lisa. I love the first tanka and how you captured the birth of a new world. Brilliant!
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Colleen, thanks, so happy you liked it.
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You’re so welcome, Lisa.
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“Cold blows over shattered bits
Dissolved in pools of hot tears”
Poetic and profound. Well done, Li. :)
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Kitty, thank you very much.
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You are welcome, Li. :)
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The emotions of celestial bodies…
A very cool interpretation. :D
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Jules, I’m glad you are pleased, thank you.
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💕
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