dVerse — MTB/Form Thursday — To My Bluebird Lover


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To My Bluebird Lover

Hearken now to bluebirds on the wing
Memory of summer’s love in mirth
Season twinkled bright and knew no dearth

From each sigh, each stroke, each peak we’d wring
Sacred wine we’d sipped from gifts of earth
Hearken now to bluebirds on the wing
Memory of summer love in mirth

Know that I will visit you in Spring
Rest you now on sunny hill’s vineyard
As I doze, bundled close to hearth
Hearkened back to bluebirds on the wing
Memory of summer love in mirth
Season twinkled bright and knew no dearth

I have to give a nod to a story I read this morning as part of the inspiration for this poem. The story, “The Blue Thing,” is from a newly published book by Anne E.G. Nydam, called, _Bitter-Sweetness & Light: A Collection of Stories, Poems, & Art_. I’ve been a follower of Anne’s blog for a few years and am always amazed at her creativity and talent.

Grace is today’s host of dVerse’ Meeting the Bar/Form. Grace wants us to write a Madrigal form poem, which is described as:

*Content: Often includes a theme of love
Structure of an English madrigal:
*Usually written in iambic pentameter.
*Comprised of three stanzas: a tercet, quatrain, and sestet.
*All three of the lines in the opening tercet are refrains.

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  1. That is so sweet and lovely. :-)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Chris, thank you.

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  2. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    I enjoyed your theme of the bluebird in this piece of poetry.

    “Know that I will visit you in spring”

    I wish spring would come sooner than later…so cold here.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you, Truedessa. I hear you on spring getting its green self here soon.

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  3. Helen's avatar Helen says:

    Your Madrigal feels and reads like it was composed centuries ago ! I love it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Helen, who is to say it wasn’t… Thank you and glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    I too love the ancient feel of these. But we can all identify with those dreams of spring! (K)

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  5. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    Love this line: Memory of summer love in mirth. You made me excited to see the bluebirds in spring. Have a good weekend.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Grace, thank you very much, glad you enjoyed that line and are excited to see the bluebirds. I took that pic on 0404 so just a few weeks more…
      Hoping you also have a good one.

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  6. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar Badfinger (Max) says:

    A lot of nice lines in there Lisa…I love those birds.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Max :)

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  7. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    This is so beautiful Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sadje, thank you so much <3

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re most welcome

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  8. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    A lovely madrigal Li – I too know Anne’s blog through the A to Z – and that is my task for this morning – to get stuck into A to Z posts ahead of time…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Andrew. Not sure if I knew you were in A to Z but will look for you in April. Anne’s site/ blog is amazing isn’t it.

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      1. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

        It is and I know your posts there too…

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  9. I love how you incorporated birds and nature into your poem, Lisa! Great poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Yvette, thanks much :) <3

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  10. pinktoaddiaries's avatar Pink says:

    i love bluebirds and always think of them as the happiness bird. … and what a lovely poem to read, Lisa. nicely done!

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  11. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    Your bluebird lover madrigal was a delight to read, Lisa, and the language you use is so apt for the form.

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        You’re welcome, LIsa!

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  12. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    A madrigal sublime, a poem of hope, layers. Also – thank you for the tube and the link to Nydam’s blog too, wow.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Paul, thank you. One of my favorite songs by k.d. I’ve gotten into the habit of reading every morning with first cuppajoe and am reading a story or poem a day by Anne out of this new book. HIGHLY recommend it. I know you would love it.

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  13. There’s a timeless feel to your madrigal, Li. Such a delight to read. ❤️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      So happy you enjoyed the poem, Punam <3

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      1. I sure did, Li. ❤️

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  14. Ain - UA's avatar Ain says:

    A touch of soft, sweet shakespearan voice this Li, though it also had me humming “Bluebird” by Mc Cartney….very romantic, lovely..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ain, thanks so much, love what it evoked for you.

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  15. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    A bit of Romeo and Juliet…

    :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I love your smiley face. Getting sunshine in your neck of the woods?

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        Some, mostly the roar of March winds.

        :)

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