dVerse — Memento — July Baby Beach Days


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July baby days at the lake
we pack up dry gear to
get wet
We arrive as sun starts to slake
sugar sand has now cooled
no sweat

Lay out blanket, toss off layers
she toddles for shallows
we laugh
She floats on a turtle with air
pushed by ring of shadows
riff-raffed

Laura is today’s host at dVerse’ Meeting the Bar/Form. Laura says:
Write a poem in Memento form with a holiday or an anniversary (formal or informal) theme.

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  1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love the way you laid out your poem, Lisa, like ebbing waves on the lake. Delightful memories!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I appreciate that feedback. Smiling just thinking of her playing in the water <3

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        Yes, that’s a lovely image, Lisa. I have a similar photo of Ellen.

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      2. mitchteemley's avatar mitchteemley says:

        Simply charming, Lisa.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          Thanks, Mitch.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Caleb :)

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  2. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Nice one Lisa

    much♡love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Gillena <3

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  3. An image that conjures up in-pool fun every time.
    😊💦

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  4. Ain - UA's avatar Ain - UA says:

    Tender verse of waves of little memories that grow in time…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Well-put, Ain.

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  5. Reminiscent of so many summers in Montauk. They were such great times. Thanks for the memories, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Glad they brought back pleasant memories to you, Nancy.

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  6. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin says:

    lots of laughs. Pack dry clothes to get wet 👏🏽

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Selma, we usually sit on towels in the car and air dry. Always a fun time. I’m sure you know, with your new grandchild <3

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  7. This is lovely. Brings back my own memories 🩵

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Robbie, I’m so happy that it does. We’ve always lived near Lake Michigan and inland lakes, so it is part of our family DNA at this point. Thank you <3

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      That makes me happy, Rosemary <3

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  8. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    Nothing governs which memories are to become the most awesome mementos, to be treasured and revisited as anniversaries – lovely, Li…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Totally agree, Andrew, thank you. I just read your poem and very much enjoyed it.

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  9. Brendan's avatar Brendan says:

    Lovely and lively memento doused in nascent summer joy.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I had to look up nascent. Agreed. Thanks, Brendan.

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  10. Helen's avatar Helen says:

    This is epic ‘lazy hazy days of summer’ stuff and incredibly sweet, Lisa!!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Helen, many thanks :)

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  11. A sweet summery scene! I could see it and feel it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Me too, D :) We went this past Sunday and it was simply perfect in everyway.

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