dVerse OLN 392 — Night Music

The Sleeping Gypsy, by Henri Rousseau

Night Music

In respite of cool desert sand,
emptied flagon, and full moon,
dreams prowl, sleek, well-fed,
wide awake, tickling my toes,
pulling strings, weaving icons
to archetypes made manifest.

I am a traveler, cloaked in rain-
bow, charred under daybright;
yet further landscapes open
in shadows of music’s night.

Grace is today’s host for dVerse’ Open Link Night. Grace gave us the optional image and title to be inspired by. Thanks for this one.

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  1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I’ve been encountering those dreams a lot lately, Lisa, and they are indeed sleek and well-fed. I just wish they’d stop tickling my toes and let me sleep! I love these lines:

    ‘I am a traveler, cloaked in rain-
    bow, charred under daybright’.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      haha, Kim :) Glad you enjoyed those lines.

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  2. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    “traveler cloacked in raonbow”

    nice image

    much♡love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Gillena. I enjoyed your Rengay with David also.

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  3. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    I love how the dreams are active like the lion with: dreams prowl, sleek, well-fed,
    wide awake, tickling my toes.

    You also captured the traveler’s search for adventures. Thanks for capturing the scene with your poetic brush.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks so much for your feedback, Grace <3

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  4. The imagery in every line of your poem really heightens the surreal world within the dream. Hope I am making sense? Once again, I really love this one very much.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Charlie, thanks for sharing what you see in it.

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  5. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Very nice poem, Lisa. I like the way you divided the painting into reality and dreams!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Dwight. It seems clear to me the traveler is dreaming.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        I believe your are right.

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  6. This is magical, Lisa. I LOVE that last stanza. “I am a traveler, cloaked in rainbow…” Fabulous imagery!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Colleen, I tried to speak to the imagery in the painting. Thanks much.

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  7. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Dreamshadows are full of music–wonderful take on this magical painting, a favorite of mine. (K)

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  8. Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES's avatar Colleen@ LOOSELEAFNOTES says:

    I think she lifted the flute and played. Or is it an empty flask?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I thought it was a walking stick in her hand, but maybe it is a flute. The “flask” is off to the side. It works in either case for me :)

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  9. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    I read this thrice, delighting in it more with each reading. A wonderful blend of reality and dreamscapes beatifully woven together

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Pleased that you took time with it and happy that enjoyed it :) Nice to “see” you, Dale.

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        I did! Yeah, I sneak a break now and again and try to read a few posts. I won’t be seeing the light until November 1. Sometimes I hate tourism season!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          I appreciate knowing why you’ve been scarce. Happy you are sneaking breaks now and again. See you in November (if not before then now and again.) <3

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          1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

            Not by choice, I can assure you! I am definitely going to do a Walktober so there is that… 💞

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

              Is that where you walk tourists around town?

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              1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

                Haha! Nope. I’m not a tourist guide (yet) – it’s where I participate in Dawn’s (Change is Hard) Walktober. It used to be Robin (Breezes at Dawn) who hosted it. Just a bunch of fall images shared.

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  10. Ron.'s avatar Ron. says:

    Really dug this one, Lisa, esp “daybright”

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ron, happy you did :)

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  11. jaerose37's avatar jaerose37 says:

    I love the line break in rain – bow..and beautiful imagery immersing us in the story of the painting – Jae

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Jae, so happy it pleased you <3

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  12. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    Wonderful imagery that adds much to the image, bringing it to life and accentuating its features. Nicely done, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Steve, thanks so much. Happy you feel it does.

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa!

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  13. you captured the desert Li. I love this line

    I am a traveler, cloaked in rain-
    bow, charred under daybright;

    Beautiful 🥰

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  14. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Beautifully done Li

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you, Sadje :)

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome my friend

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  15. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

    I love Henri Rousseau and your interpretation of this painting, especially how you describe the lion as “dreams prowl. sleek, well-fed.”

    I also love “I am a traveler, cloaked in rain-
    bow…”

    🙂

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sunra, thank you very much.

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  16. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    Loved where you traveled with this one. I felt the lion was symbolic of strength and courage. Her journey has been a difficult one and her walking stick has taken her many miles, I think.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Truedessa you see her <3

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  17. Beautifully imaginative!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Rosemary, many thanks.

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  18. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    Who would not dream of a sleek, well-fed lion tickling their toes as they sleep in the cool nightime sands, Li – beautifully evoked…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Andrew, thanks much :)

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  19. To be a traveller like this… that’s what dreams are for

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Indeed, Bjorn. Now if you could shift out of your nightmares and become the lion…

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  20. That is so mysterious…I like it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      The dream world is wonderfully mysterious.

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