dVerse — Tuesday Poetics — flipping the script on horror movie quotes

I know what you did last summer” 
Ben Willis, I Know What You Did Last Summer (1997)

I Know What You Did Last Summer

I know what you did last summer
with your little red wagon
when your garden was heavy
with produce: carrots, radish
cucumber, zucchini, green beans,
strawberries, blueberries, lettuce,
spinach, chard, kale, cabbage.

The first time I saw you
was the day I left my windows
open to warm breeze.
My curtains flip-flapped
aroma of sweet and pungent,
calling me to look out.
You were just passing by…

I stepped out into afternoon
and watched you
and your black cat, Max,
squeak and stroll
up Old Mr. Johnson’s drive-
way. You rang his doorbell
and Myrtle, his peach poodle,

barked her wheezy bark
until he creaked open the door.
“Mr. Johnson, I have early beans,
and many more tasty things
to share.” Mr. Johnson’s
dentures gleamed in sunlight.
Then on you went to each need,

until your little red wagon
bounced, empty, over
root-lifted sidewalk jumps
back home, Max drooped
over your shoulders. You,
Robin Hood of Garden Bounty.

You passed away this winter
but your generosity will live
on forever in the hearts and
smiles of the people who
benefited from it. Max, now
sitting on my windowsill,
aggrieved, still listens for you…


Mish is today’s host of dVerse’ Poetics Tuesday. Mish wants us to choose one of the lines from a horror movie and use it in a poem.

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  1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Heartwarming–just what I needed today. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Happy to oblige, K.

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  2. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    What a heart-warming story Lisa from the line of such a dark film 💕

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Someone. Never saw the movie, but I can imagine.

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  3. What a beautiful bowl of goodies! 😋

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  4. bruce@ssa's avatar bruce@ssa says:

    The title is a perfect “pivot” to the story itself, Lisa. Indeed, a summer with warm memories that will last all year…every year.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Bruce, I like how you put that. :)

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  5. That was wonderful, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you very much, Nancy.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, AM.

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  6. When we were kids we used to load our wagon with vegetables from my parents garden and walk around the neighborhood selling them. Now as an adult I know that gardening is not easy and I wonder what my parents really thought!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Christine, I’m glad my poem brought the memories back to you. You mean, do you wonder if your parents didn’t want you to sell them?

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      1. Yes! I can only imagine them now going out to the garden to find the veggies all gone!

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          Sounds like maybe they wanted to cultivate something good in you then. I understand about the now. Healthy food prices have gone through the roof!

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          1. When I used to teach the little guys, who all came from poverty, I remember being amazed that some of them had never tried blueberries, let alone starfruit and some of the other fruits I would bring in.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

              Christine, isn’t that heartbreaking. I remember some of the kids I had on caseload had never been to Lake Michigan (which our town is right on the lake.) Their worlds were confined to a few city blocks, and their diets whatever the corner convenience store could provide. :(

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              1. That reminds me of a question I asked those same kids once. I asked “If grandma lives over on this side of the river (I drew a diagram) and you have to go over this bridge to get to her house, what happens if the bridge is broken?” Their responses were that you don’t get to see grandma! Not one of them said to go a different way. Yes, heartbreaking.

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  7. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Beautifully written, Lisa. It is not what we take with us when we are gone, but what we leave behind….
    your generosity will live
    on forever in the hearts and
    smiles of the people who
    benefited from it.

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  8. How poignant – the legacy of good that lasts.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks for reading, WP.

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  9. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    This is so beautiful, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Steve, thanks so much. I decided to write “normie” with it. lol

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        You’re welcome, good choice!

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  10. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons says:

    What a beautiful story you tell in you poem, Li. I love it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Judy, thank you. I see you as a person interacting in the middle of your community like him.

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  11. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A very heartwarming poem

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sadje, thank you. Just imagine a world where everyone helped their neighbors this way <3

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        It would be heaven on earth.

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  12. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    Thank you for cheering me up this grey October morning, Lisa, with your summer tale of the little red wagon and the thought of all that wonderful home-grown food. I love how you set the scene in the second stanza, with the open windows, the curtains flip-flapping (great use of sound there), and the introduction of Max the cat in the third (I used to have a cat called Max). I felt I knew Old Mr. Johnson and Myrtle – and that name you gave your character, the ‘Robin Hood of Garden Bounty’! The ending is bittersweet; I’m glad Max found a new home.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      {{{HUGS}}} Your comment cheered me up. Thank you.

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        Always a pleasure, Lisa.

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  13. I love this, Li! Simple things can being so much joy. ❤️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Punam, I totally agree! I’m always subconsciously looking for them, I think, and they show themselves <3 Thank you.

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  14. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

    Oh! This is such a beautiful story in a poem, Li! I love all the details of the garden bounty and Max the cat. Heartwarming!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Merril, happy you enjoyed the narrative poem, thank you.

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      1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

        I did, Li!
        BTW, I emailed you on Saturday.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          Merril, I just looked through my inbox and junk mail folders for Saturday and did not find it. Could you please re-send?

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          1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

            I re-sent it. It wasn’t anything that important, just responding to the comment you made to me about something at OLN.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

              I got it and I see now why I didn’t before. The gmail account was supposed to be a one-use only but it ended up taking over things it shouldn’t have! I just sent a message to the dVerse hosts group about it. Thanks for re-sending it.

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              1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

                Yes, saw your email. I’m glad it’s all straightened out now.

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                1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

                  Me too. I was a bit anxious for a minute there.

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  15. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Such a beautiful poem!

    Bravo

    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    much♡love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you and you’re welcome, Gillena. Glad you liked it.

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  16. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    That was beautiful. What a great way to change that quote into a warm remembrance.

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    1. marialberg's avatar marialberg says:

      That was me, Maria.

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Maria, glad you enjoyed it, and there was a certain relief in neutralizing an iota of evil into beauty.

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  17. This was delightful to read, Li, though sad at the end–but still the generosity and memory of it lives on in those who were blessed by it and in your poem.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      <3 Thanks much, Jennifer. I enjoyed writing about a good human being.

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  18. Mish's avatar Mish says:

    This truly touched my heart, Li. I never watched the movie but I remember the eerie vibe that the previews evoked. Wow, did your heart-warming piece ever “flip the switch”! I so want this to be a true story.

    Mish

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Mish, happy it touched your heart. Never saw the movie but I remember others like it, where the stalker would cut the phone lines so they were unable to call for help. One of the big bonuses of having a cell phone!

      Mish it’s a compilation of many altruistic individuals I’ve met along the way, so yes, it is a “true story.” Thanks so much.

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  19. What a wonderful summer memory with a sad ending… but remembering the good things is what we should do.

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  20. Lisa, I love how “Robin Hood of Garden Bounty” captures the whole poem’s heart—it feels tender and quietly heroic.

    ~David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Quiet heroes are the best kind. Thanks, David, glad you liked it.

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  21. Helen's avatar Helen says:

    There is no way I could have read your exquisite poem without shedding a tear or two. “Robin Hood of Garden Bounty” the kind of person worth knowing, celebrating. Thanks for leaving me comment, Merril.

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    1. Helen's avatar Helen says:

      So sorry for not using your name, Lisa … I had just finished reading Merril’s poem and lost track of where I was, could you blame it on my age? LOL LOL

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      1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

        No worries, Helen. I’ve done it myself more than once <3

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      <3 Thanks so much, Helen. People like him are boddhisatvas.

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  22. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi says:

    This is such a heartwarming poem, Lisa! 😍😍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Glad it warmed your heart, Sanaa <3

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