dVerse OLN 395 — Dearest Lake


taken on 110625

Dearest Lake,

Upon your sugar shoulders I’ve toddled,
chased minnows in your shallows, dug
for clams with growing, waterlogged feet.
I’ve squealed, held on on you in ski-boat
donuts. My friend had a keep-dry wrap;
her hand healing from a barb wired fence.

Never far from you, with innumerable rides,
drives, innertubes, sailboats; your exhales
casting fishy seaweed stench into our noses,
that wrinkle them as they fill laughing lungs.

Whatever the vehicle, we meander home,
our feet, blankets, bags, swimsuits carry
some of you with us. Memories most.
You’ve been a lifetime love of me and mine.

Thank you, my friend, for the good times.
Yours,


taken on 110625. 
you can see a red and white marker to the left,
which starts the channel leading into Lake Michigan

Björn is today’s host of dVerse’ OpenLinkNight.  Björn gave us an optional image to write to or a suggestion we may write an epistolary poem.  I decided to write an epistolary poem to the inland lake I grew up near and that I still live just a few miles from.

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  1. bruce@ssa's avatar bruce@ssa says:

    I have never had the pleasure to live in the vicinity of a lake like this, Lisa. It looks and sounds so welcoming. A fitting tribute to a location which obviously is near…and dear…to you.😊

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Lake and summer are intertwined here, and summer is so short. Thanks, Bruce.

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      1. bruce@ssa's avatar bruce@ssa says:

        Lisa, Mrs. B is a summer person also, and she has been trying to extend it as long as possible this year (as usual!). She feels the same…summer too short!🌞

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A beautiful poem Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Sadje, thank you.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome

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  3. Brendan's avatar Brendan says:

    Remembrance and reverence, signed, sealed and delivered!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      :) Thanks, Brendan!

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  4. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons says:

    I had a lovely visit to your lake many years ago with my husband, who grew up in Royal Oaks, Michigan. I’m about to depart for a month on Lake Bacalar in Quintana Roo–far from your lake of lovely memories, but hope to make a few of my own. Thanks for sharing your memories, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I went to a Cake concert in Royal Oak many moons ago now. Nice, friendly community.

      Just looked at a map of where you are going. Another paradise! How far is that from Lake Chapala? Hoping you share pics and stories of your adventures there.

      Happy to share the memories.

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      1. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons says:

        About 1,200 miles.

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      2. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons says:

        I’m fairly sure I’ll share pics, Lisa…ha.

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  5. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55 says:

    I had to keep remembering that this was a freshwater lake and not the sea, Li – but your evocative descriptions show that a beach is a beach whether the water is fresh or salty…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Indeed, Andrew.

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  6. This really hit me Lisa… we used to go to Panama City every summer and your poem really tells it all… loved the first line “Upon your sugar shoulders I’ve toddled”

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Happy it brought back those memories for you, Max. I think we are all Water Babies housed in bags of skin.

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  7. Thanks for the memories. From early June camping with no running water as a young child, when a bath meant in the lake, to teen years spent either skiing (if I could afford gas) or just using the boat as a raft in the middle of the lake. I guess I should put on my jacket and go for a walk along the lakeshore now.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      You’re welcome, Steve. Water, the giver of life and fun in the sun. Rustic camping breeds character, I think. One thing my fam wasn’t into, probably because we camped near the water in our homes. My grandparents lived in home cobbled together from 7 small cabins that were hauled up the hill from Mona Lake. A home like theirs will never be again.

      Yes, I think you should.

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  8. Helen's avatar Helen says:

    Lisa, the first [beautiful] line of this love letter set the tone for what followed … Sighs all the way round from my corner of the world.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Helen, thanks so much. I’m sure you have beautiful lakes around where you live also.

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  9. lisaapaul's avatar lisaapaul says:

    I am a fan of Lake Michigan and I love this tribute to “a lifetime love” of yours. I loved reading about your happy times ✨🩵✨

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Lisa, so glad you did and that you are a fan of Lake MI.

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  10. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    That’s a lovely, memory-laden poem, Lisa. I can tell the lake is important to you.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Steve. Couldn’t imagine living away from fresh water lakes.

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        You’re welcome. Being near water is good for the soul.

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  11. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Beautifully written, Lisa. What great memories you carried home with you.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Dwight. Yes, indeed. Memories to cherish in a childhood that often wasn’t very happy.

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  12. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    This is wonderful, Lisa. I can feel your love of the beach and water through every line.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Dale. I know you can relate to this, where you live.

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        Indeed… Mind you, a river is different from a lake/beach but still.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          Question: is the water in the river fresh or salt? Isn’t it the St. Lawrence Seaway? I’ve always wondered about that.

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          1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

            Where I am, there is no salt but as you go down to Quebec City and further it gets saltier and saltier until it empties into the ocean.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

              OK, good to know. One more question and I promise I’ll stop. Is this river part of the St. Lawrence Seaway and if so, do you see a lot of people traveling it on sail or other types of boats? A guy I used to work with and his wife did some kind of circuit where they traveled the seaway and ended up in FL.

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              1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

                Don’t be shy. I love that you are curious!
                I actually supply the guides for the cruises that come up the seaway to the Great Lakes (when they stop in Toronto. And yes, the seaway flows into the St-Lawrence which flows into the sea. We have Victory Cruise Lines as well as two ships from Viking (they are the ones I supply the guides for). Sometimes ships coming into Montreal come through the Seaway and are delayed at the locks. Fun stuff.

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                1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

                  Dear Dale, thank you for educating me on it. Maybe one day I will get to visit the fair city of Montreal. I visited Toronto once, back in 2001, and was agog at it.

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                  1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

                    If you do, you must let me know. I’m a pretty good tour guide, I’ve been told!

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  13. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    The water calls to us. So much happiness in these words. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      You didn’t make it to the beach this past summer with your family did you?

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      1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

        Yes we did. And we’re already planning for next summer.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          Sorry, my memory isn’t what it used to be. Happy to hear it.

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          1. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

            It’s always a welcome break.

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  14. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I enjoyed your letter to a lake, Lisa, the internal rhyme of ‘minnows in your shallows’, and the many ways the lake has kept you amused.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Kim, glad you enjoyed it.

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa.

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  15. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

    I can see why this lake deserves an ode. Lovely words, Lisa 🤍

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Nina, thanks so much <3

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      1. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa!

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  16. That is a beautiful body of water. It looks so peaceful. 😊

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      It is fairly peaceful, you’re right. It can get choppy at times but not bad. Lake Michigan, that it connects to, is another story. I prefer this lake for watercraft.

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      1. I’ve heard things about Lake Michigan, so I believe you. 😁

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  17. marja's avatar marja says:

    A beautiful ode to the Lake I hope you may long enjoy it

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Marja, I surely hope so. Thank you.

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  18. A lake is so much all the activities it invites you to do… good to see your address to it… (the ending made me think that it is a farewell, which i hope it is not)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Yes, it is. It’s a blank slate of beauty that invites you in. I don’t foresee leaving this place beyond an occasional vacation, but with the political mayhem…

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