#FF — Invisible Shadows

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Invisible Shadows

The car’s rev and the garage door’s gentle rumble tells Maurice his sister’s family is leaving for the annual feast at Maryjane’s house. He remembers Maryjane’s turtle cheesecake and starts drooling.

Maurice wiggles out of the sleeping bag carefully hidden in Susie’s shed. He makes his way to her back slider and jimmies the lock.

Maurice scrounges the freezer, chooses a casserole that won’t be missed, and nukes it. After eating warm casserole and taking a dump, he takes a long, hot shower. Nabs clean clothes from deep in Jim’s dresser. He dozes on Susie and Jim’s bed.

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Please pray for the unhoused.
Please pray for family outcasts.
Please pray for those who are struggling with mental health issues.
Please pray for those who are struggling with substance abuse issues.

 

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.

33 Comments Add yours

  1. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles says:

    I understand the message but “Turtle cheesecake?”

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      1. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles says:

        So, no actual turtles.

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  2. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    Awesome story Li :-) my prayers go out to all you mentioned!

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  3. I wonder if the family have chosen not to notice

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Good question, Neil.

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  4. Turtle Cheesecake (ahhhh as Homer Simpson drooling)…glad Maurice ate!
    Totally agree on your four requests… have a Merry Christmas Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks Max. Happy Holidays!

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  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A very moving story dear friend. So tough being homeless in any weather but winter is the hardest.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Sadje. Winter can be a killer for them.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        Yes so true and so sad

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  6. Many unanswered questions here, Lisa. I wonder if his family would welcome him.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Nancy, for reading. One can hope…

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  7. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    Excellent story and message Lisa 🩷

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you very much, Ange.

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  8. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    Thank you for bringing in the unhoused, the outcasts and those struggling with addictions and other life challenges.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      You are welcome. There are a lot of them about.

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      1. Steve's avatar Steve says:

        There certainly are. More and more. 😢

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  9. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell says:

    Oh dear

    It’s terrible he has no where to live but I’m not sure I’d like a stranger rifling through my things

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Laurie, you could say it’s complicated. He is not a stranger ; he’s the brother of one of the owners of the home.

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      p.s. Thanks for reading and your thoughtful comment.

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  10. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    A good story and a good message, Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Chris, thanks much.

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  11. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    When I went out to refill my bird feeder this morning, our shed door was open. Too often hubby forgets to lock it – thankfully when I told him about it he mentioned that he was in it yesterday aftenoon. I was concerned because we have had some thefts in the neighborhood (last year anyway).

    A prayer was offered. Thank you – and Amen.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I used to keep my bird feed in metal cans out in the carport, but some critter learned how to open them (guessing raccoons or possums?) so now I keep them in the entryway. Glad they didn’t raid your storage container.

      Sorry you have/had to worry about thieves in your neighborhood, Jules. Glad nothing was missing.

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      p.s. Thank you for the prayers. They are needed more than ever.

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  12. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    I have my seed on my porch… one time I left it out in a plastic container that the squirrels ate through! I had thought I heard the shed door flapping in the wind… but when you don’t expect something you sometimes ignore it.

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  13. Nandini Deka's avatar Nandini Deka says:

    prayers for all mentioned and others too….lovely n touching tale…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Nandini, thanks for reading and the prayers <3

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  14. Dear Lisa,

    A poignant story that has me wondering what happened to Maurice. Prayers always for homeless. So many stories out there. Scary because it can happen to anyone.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Rochelle, I wonder also. Thanks for the prayers. And yes, it can.
      Shalom,
      Lisa

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