dVerse Prosery Monday — Final kiss

Bury me with the lies I told.
–Alejandro Escovedo, from “Bury Me

Final Kiss

We grew up as neighbors. Your folks and ours were best friends. Moms canning peaches together every summer. Dads on the same bowling league. Remember when we all got Stingrays with banana seats?

I remember it started in 9th grade, when we took theater class. When Billy stayed with orchestra. When Mrs. Hendon made us leads in Romeo & Juliet. When we had to kiss.

By our senior year, you and Billy were engaged. Marilyn and I were dating.

You and Billy married and had couples housing at university three hours away; Susie and I visited you two the first weekend of every month.

Everyone says he looks like me.

We’re 80 now. I could never have married. I miss Billy. I tend the lilies on his grave. Please, never tell Will Jr. Bury me with the lies I told. Farewell, my beloved Juliet.

I am today’s host for dVerse’ Prosery Monday, where we write a 144-word story using the given song lyric.

40 Comments Add yours

  1. There are some secrets that probably should go to the grave…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      totally agree, Bjorn

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    A complicated love story with a sad ending, Lisa.

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        You’re most welcome, Lisa!

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  3. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    An interesting story, Lisa. I imagine there are a lot more who are buried with family secrets untold!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Dwight. I agree with you. With DNA databases, a lot of those secrets are coming to light. Sometimes I think it is best if they are laid to rest.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You might be right!

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  4. An entire novel in so few words. Bravo!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Susan, thank you <3

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  5. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Great prompt and your story

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Cheryl (?)

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  6. It’s probably for the best. Sad though.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I think you’re right, Nancy. Uncle just doesn’t have the same ring to it as Dad :(

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  7. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    As others have noted, some secrets are best kept. And yet…(K)

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  8. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    The angst of a secret that can never be told. Often one can’t pull a weed without destroying the beauty of the flower one is protecting. (Dennis Ryle)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Angst is a good word for it, Dennis.

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  9. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A secret that should stay hidden

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks for weighing in, Sadje. It’s a complicated situation for sure.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        Oh yes very true.

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  10. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    A sad tale but yes, some secrets are not meant to be shared…

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Dale, thanks for reading and your input on it.

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        Always my pleasure, Lisa.

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  11. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Beautifully told!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      V, thank you <3

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  12. Helen's avatar Helen says:

    Sitting here staring at my monitor, after finishing your prose! Chills all over, Lisa. Secrets, lies, of commission, omission … deadly PS* thanks for the Glenn memory, I enjoyed his unique style.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Helen, such a deep and complicated situation for sure. Thank you for reading and your impressions of it. You’re welcome on Glenn <3

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  13. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    A very evocative story Li :D

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  14. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

    So sad, Li. I think there must be many such stories and secrets. Though now with DNA testing, they might not remain secrets.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Yes, it is. They’ve both been living a lie for far too long, and I think it finally got to him. I agree, there are a lot of surprises being sprung all over the place. There is a TV show out there that does just that.

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      1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

        Oh, a TV show that springs such surprises sounds pretty awful. It happens on Finding Your Roots, but it’s handled much more sensitively, and generally (but not always) it’s more distant ancestors.
        But people also find relatives they do want to connect with.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          Ah, Finding Your Roots is the show I was thinking of. Then there are shows like Who’s The Daddy Maury Povich lol

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          1. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith says:

            We love Finding Your Roots.
            Our older child once ran into Henry Louis Gates at the airport, and they were so star-struck, they couldn’t get a coherent sentence out.

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            1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

              HLG is a sharp cookie.

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  15. zumpoems's avatar zumpoems says:

    I loved how you weaved a compelling narrative into a beautifully evocative, wistful poem. Very well done!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Zum, thank you :) What name do you go by, btw?

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  16. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    The pain of holding a lie so long, for some an agony, a torch. (I remember those bikes) A powerful story Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Paul, I know you understand, having counseled so many in crisis. Thank you.

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