dVerse Q241 — Heaven’s Rose

Heaven’s Rose

Flowers, open, spread your joy.
Love seeds plant, germinate,
our prayer needs merged
with faith. Sprouted field
emerge neath warmth,
resilient we reach yet
soft, healing yield

blooms, be
listeners,
organic
oeuvre
music.
Sweet

melody rise as
an aerial fragrance,
perfume reaching heaven’s nose.

De, aka whimsygizmo, is today’s host for dVerse’ Quadrille Monday.  De would like us to write a 44-word poem using the word flower.

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  1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    A delightfully perfumed quadrille, Lisa, and I love the vase shape.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Kim.

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa.

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  2. lillian's avatar lillian says:

    What a wonderful what I call, shape poem! And I am most smitten with these lines:”melody rise asan aerial fragrance,perfume reaching heaven’s nose

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Lillian. I made it an acrostic also, spelling out flowers bloom map.

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  3. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    Beautiful Li :-) Loved it! <3

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  4. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    Beautiful!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Someone!

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  5. Ain - UA's avatar Ain - UA says:

    Sublimely original — and sublime, itflows, it flows, all the more with this concept….the internal rhythm impeccable…goodness, must have taken some ‘tightening’ to get just right..,

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ain, thanks so much. It took some tweaking, yes :) Hope you are doing well.

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  6. Steve's avatar Steve says:

    Lovely poem, Lisa. The layout also complements the words.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Steve :)

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  7. Kaci Rigney's avatar Kaci Rigney says:

    Okay! I love this. A quadrille, a concrete poem, and an acrostic! I’m impressed, Li. Not only a concrete poem, but one that would hold a flower! Yay!

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  8. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    An acrostic for a Quadrille! You are great, Lisa. Love it.

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  9. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Luv luv your acrostic quadrille

    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    much love

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