dVerse Q242 — My Middle Name


“Wild Head” 

                     My Middle Name

Jones is my wildling……….middle name.
Born ravenous……………..under howling moon
Chronic condition…………..that won’t be tamed
Drive for satisfaction, source of bleeding shame
Hungry for nouns, verbs, superlative adjectives,
where moderation…………..is a dirty word.
I’m outside of a world………that demands control.

I am today’s host for dVerse’ Quadrille Monday.  The prompt is to write a 44-word poem using some form of hunger.

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  1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    That is different, Lisa, especially the form for a quadrille, and the subject wild and ravenous, a kind of grammatical/poetic werewolf ‘hungry for nouns, verbs, superlative adjectives’,

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Kim. I like how you see it :)

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        You’re welcome, Lisa.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

          Kim, very sorry to hear about your vision situation.

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  2. Dora's avatar Dora says:

    Creativity, untamed, in a “world that demands control” is the realm of us “wildlings,” I think. I love the hunger that comes through your words, Li, “ravenous …. under howling moon.”

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Dora, thank you very much. Avoiding being siphoned in one way or another makes the hunger all the greater imo.

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  3. Lovely music, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Jim. Temple of the Dog is the group that came together after Mother Love Bone’s lead singer, Andy Wood, died from a drug OD. Chris Cornell and Matt Cameron (drummer) from Soundgarden; Mike McCready (lead guitar,) Jeff Ament (bass,) and Stone Gossard (rhythm guitar) from Mother Love Bone; and Eddie Vedder, who later replaced Andy and renamed themselves Pearl Jam. Matt later become PJ’s drummer.

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Jim, oops on that comment. You were talking about the St. Vincent song, not the Temple of the Dog song I used in my dVerse prompt. Yes, St. Vincent song is very pretty :)

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      1. That makes more sense now, as I didn’t think all these groups were related.

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  4. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    That is so original, Lisa! Excellent, Miss Wildling!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Dale, thanks so much! Much appreciated. From one Wildling to Another <3

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      1. Dale's avatar Dale says:

        Ya think I am? I like that idea! :)

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  5. rog's avatar rog says:

    moderation is the dirtiest word for me when it comes to poetry. let all those words flow

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      It may be the last stand of freedom.

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  6. glyn40wilton's avatar glyn40wilton says:

    I must catch up on St. Vincent

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Glyn, the more I heard of St. Vincent, the more I like. I know that everyone’s in a tizzy because Bad Bunny’s album is completely in Spanish, but St. Vincent did them one better: they took one of their albums and re-recorded it all in Spanish.

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  7. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Hungry for words of all types…may we never be satiated. (K)

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  8. Ron.'s avatar Ron. says:

    Love this piece, L; esp the 2 closing lines (right up my alley). I can’t even spell Moderation…

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  9. Ron.'s avatar Ron. says:

    Oh, and THANKS for the cool prompt!

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  10. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz says:

    I love all the punnage in your poem, the whole concept, the form, the title. Your wildling self is evident 🤍

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