dVerse Tuesday Poetics — Winter’s Leftovers

Winter’s Leftovers

snow bones
are resting
wet, flat straw fields
a million empty sunflower shells
for crows
to pick
tidbits from
hungry blue jays
swarm amidst
toothpick skies
to poke

frozen lake
still still
no wind
to hold
breath(e) out
chainsaw in the distance
hot rooibos
warms, eases
cold knuckles
book dust
dusty poems
George Saunders’ Vigil
too short
grey cotton
muffles, occludes
rainbow colors
spring dreams
please call after
dusk

Melissa is today’s host for dVerse’ Tuesday Poetics. Melissa says:
Today we’re going to write in only phrases. The style and format of poem is up to you. You can make a list, you can string together different groups of words and experiment. The only rule is that you may not use complete sentences in your poem.

34 Comments Add yours

  1. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    Love this Li very nicely done! 🥰🥰💝💝

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, CA <3

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love the title, Lisa, the shape of your poem, and the thought of ‘snow bones’ resting, the ‘toothpick skies’ and the sound of the ‘chainsaw in the distance’, the only sound breaking the silence. The ending made me smile.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Oh wow, Kim, never even thought of the chainsaw breaking the silence. I’m glad you noticed it. Happy the end made you smile, thank you <3

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

        My pleasure, Lisa. ❤

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    2. ‘snow bones’ and ‘toothpick skies’ stood out to me too 👍

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      1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

        Awesome, Shaun, thank you :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Nancy, thank you <3

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  3. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Nice one

    much love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Gillena, thank you <3

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  4. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    ’snow bones’ what a brilliant image Lisa I love this poem 💕

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ange, thank Melissa. It’s all her fault ;)

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      1. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

        I know! I found it quite the challenge 😃

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  5. Ain's avatar Ain says:

    With scattered words and thoughts you created real mood & feeling, but there is more: laid out in this style, openings are left for the reader to interpret how they “want” allowing for strong association. Very nice, easy to “see” and “imagine.”

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ain, thanks so much. I watched a doc movie on a strip of forest that Ukranians fighting/dying to go “2000 Meters to Andriivka” the other night. Haunting :(

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  6. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Nicely done, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Dwight.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome.

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  7. I love snow bones!! Great imagery in your phrases, Lisa. Keep dreaming of spring. 🌷

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Colleen! I will <3

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  8. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    The blue jays are getting restless. (K)

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  9. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    I too liked the title and let me just say winter is still lingering here it snowed off and on all day. The lake here is still frozen except for a small cove where a spring comes in. A few ducks and a lone goose have been wintering there.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks on the title, Truedessa. I’m sorry winter is lingering there and the scene you paint feels a little dismal. Really hope it suns up a little for you and the feathered ones.

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  10. Rob Kistner's avatar Rob Kistner says:

    still

    still

    …🙂

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  11. I really love the phrase “snow bones,” and I hope “rainbow colors” and “spring dreams” call after dusk.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you, Melissa. I didn’t coin the term snow bones but I ran with it.

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  12. tinywhiteflag's avatar Lynne says:

    i liked, “no wind … to hold.” — so peaceful. much nicer than the days when it feels like you could reach out and wrestle a handful of it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      For sure. Yes it is. Thanks much, Lynne.

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  13. seanatbogie's avatar seanatbogie says:

    Made me sorry I don’t get to experience a snowy climate. Your attachment to it shines through.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      I think you have snow in your mountains, yes? Maybe take a trip there to experience it? I’m glad my attachment to it shines through :)

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      1. seanatbogie's avatar seanatbogie says:

        Yes we do, but visiting is not the same as it being part of the fabric of a life.

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