dVerse Q244 Silence

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Silence


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Lillian is today’s host for dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. Lillian would like us to write a 44-word poem using the word silence. The ellipses count as words in my word processing program.

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  1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    Your silent quadrille is unique, Lisa, and audacious. The image you chose to illustrate it is haunting – like the silence.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Kim, thank you! I love the word audacious. When I saw silence was the Q word this week my first thought was Silent Spring by Rachel Carson. Also about the fascist government trying to silence dissent. If they succeed we may as well curl up and die.

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  2. dead silence alright. lol

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  3. subversopus's avatar subversopus says:

    Love it!!!! Stark and unassuming, perfectly done for this prompt!!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Cara, thank you very much <3

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  4. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    very interesting, bravo

    much love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Gillena!

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  5. lillian's avatar lillian says:

    What a unique and effective approach to the prompt!!!! Yes, when I insert an ellipsis in my poem, and then do a word count review, it counts the ellipsis as a word! Powerful statement as well!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      As I mentioned to Kim, silence to me equates to Rachel Carson and oppressive regimes. Thanks, Lillian.

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  6. Stone deaf, stone dead – never thought to count ellipses Li!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Laura, I learned that they counted as words at another prompt with a word limit to it. I think they work well here. Thanks for reading and your comment.

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  7. Ron.'s avatar Ron. says:

    … ………… …… …….!!!!!!

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  8. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Ha ha… you are right about that! Love it, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks so much, Dwight :)

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome!

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  9. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    A powerful poem of few words flat-lined on the page.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Truedessa hadn’t thought of the ellipses as flat-lines, but that’s perfect! Thank you <3

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  10. authorstew's avatar authorstew says:

    Nice play on the theme. Interesting. 👏🏾👏🏾

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  11. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Moreso for some than others.

    Brilliant!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks so much, Dale <3

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  12. 🤣 I was just saying that in a comment for David! 🤣 Well done Li…well done 🤣

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Di, thanks so much. Glad we are on the same wavelength.

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  13. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Fill in the blanks…(K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Works for me! Maybe throw a few jolts of electricity in there to revive the corpse?

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