#FF — For Sally

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For Sally

Our family moved to the mountain after my sister, Sally, got gang-raped in the city. Daddy, being a jack-of-all-trades, got what they call a quick reputation with his apple jack. He traded Ol’ Pete one of Mama’s second-hand quilts for a truckload of corn. Sally and I toted whisky bottles on deer paths to our neighbors while Daddy trucked down the mountain with crates to Capone’s waiting men.

Daddy got close with Billy and Ronny, the delivery guys. One time he gave them a truckload of crates for free, with a list of names. For Sally.

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Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the host of Friday Fictioneers.

24 Comments Add yours

  1. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    that was so good Li 🦋🦋💜💜

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  2. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles says:

    The names on that list will be quietly “disappeared.”

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  3. Loved the ominous ending

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Neil.

      Like

    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      In a case like this it sure is. Thanks, Nancy.

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  4. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    Her Daddy was doing it right.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      V, you know it. Thanks much.

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  5. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    That’s one way to even things up. (K)

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  6. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    revenge is sweet.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      In this case, it won’t fix things, but you’re right, it is. Thanks, Plaridel.

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  7. Unknown's avatar Anonymous says:

    A sense revenge in the air.

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  8. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    Great story Lisa – it may go some way to getting justice 🙌

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ange, yes, some way.

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  9. My goodness. That was unsettling.
    Also, I think I know these guys.

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  10. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner says:

    Oooh, this one has ‘bite’. Great writing, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Gabi, your praise is appreciated. Thanks!

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  11. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    Glad those guys got their comeuppance. Still sad though.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Chris, you are so right. The family had to relocate, Sally has PTSD, and now Daddy has murder on his conscience. Thanks for reading and your comment.

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  12. Liam's avatar Liam says:

    An alternate background story for the Valentine’s Day Massacre.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Works for me, Liam :)

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