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dVerse Prosery Monday — Heard

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Publication – is the Auction
Of the Mind
— Emily Dickinson, from
Publication – is the Auction (788)

Heard

The first things she remembers are screams. Her own. And too much red.

Twelve years later…

Lilac wafts through window of the third-floor dormitory, waking Dahlia. It’s laundry day. Still an hour before dawn. She pads across the wooden floor, polished smooth with age, to Jeen’s cot. She shoves the rough blanket, whispers, “C’mon!”

They’re in knee-length frocks, falling down, baggy socks; carrying hand-me-down Florsheims, two sizes too big, as their clunks might alert the Sisters. They scurry down the back stairs – to the basement.

Lighting stashed candles, the girls pull out pilfered pens and paper. The stillness in the belly of the orphanage is tickled by scribbling echoes off of centuries-old stone.

Pink blushes glass block eastern windows. Dahlia says, “We’ll be famous one day, Jeen.”

“Do you know that publication is the auction of the mind?”

“Our stories need to be known.”

[144 words]

Melissa is today’s host of dVerse’ Poetics Monday. Melissa wants us to write a 144-word (or less) story using the given line of poetry.

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  1. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay says:
    April 13, 2026 at 3:17 pm

    I like both Dahlia and Jeen’s stance. You create a fascinating setting, Li. I’d like to know more about twelve years earlier, too.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:
      April 13, 2026 at 3:45 pm

      Thanks, Melissa. And thank you for a great line to write to.

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 says:
    April 13, 2026 at 3:29 pm

    A tragic story, Lisa. Women have been mistreated for centuries and just when we thought it was over, it seems to be starting all over again in the U.S.  Thankfully, those who could/can write have an escape through imagination and creativity.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:
      April 13, 2026 at 3:47 pm

      Kim thank you for your thoughtful comment. I think of many groups of women and others who have been silenced and punished for things like learning to read and write, speaking their own language, etc.

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      1. kim881's avatar kim881 says:
        April 13, 2026 at 3:51 pm

        I’ve read so many books and articles, watched films and documentaries, and I wish women had a chance to prove that men got it all wrong.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:
          April 13, 2026 at 4:34 pm

          <3

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  3. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:
    April 13, 2026 at 3:50 pm

    nice obe, Lisa

    much love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:
      April 13, 2026 at 4:33 pm

      Thanks, Gillena <3

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  4. pandamoniumcat's avatar pandamoniumcat says:
    April 13, 2026 at 4:12 pm

    You have packed so much suspense in this flash fiction Li. I feel I’d like to read more about Dahlia and Jeen, their stories do need to be told :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:
      April 13, 2026 at 4:34 pm

      Di, thanks so much for reading and your comment. Indeed!

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      1. pandamoniumcat's avatar pandamoniumcat says:
        April 13, 2026 at 4:56 pm

        You’re welcome Li :)

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  5. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:
    April 13, 2026 at 7:07 pm

    Words are empowering. (K)

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