Q255 rock me baby

rock me baby

we beach ourselves
blue-skied
warm-channeled
between wee lake
and freshwater sea

we resist currents
to sift sugar sand
our fingers find liths
smooth, fragged,
sliced through

eureka xenolith
rare nugget
that rivals fossil
upheaves in space
where it chooses

to offer itself to us

Stone-sifting is a cherished family pasttime. Wherever there is sand and lakes in Michigan, there are rocks to find. When we find an interesting one, it is passed between us to examine. Sometimes we give it to the person who is most attuned to it. The flat, brown one in the picture is one I found yesterday at the beach with family. The one on the right looks like it could be a xenolith.

Melissa is today’s host for dVerse Quadrille Monday. Melissa wants us to write a 44-word poem using some form of the word xenolith.

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  1. So wonderful to go hunting for those polished rocks.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Bjorn, they have been through a lot to get that polish. I loved having granddaughter be a part of it yesterday but she was fighting the current and could only look at our finds.

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love finding unusual stones on the beach, Lisa, and enjoyed your rocky quadrille, Lisa! These lines really appealed to me, especially the sibilant and almost alliterative sounds:

    ‘we resist currents
    to sift sugar sand
    our fingers find liths
    smooth, fragged,
    sliced through’.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks so much for your feedback and happy you connect with finding stones on the beach <3

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Catherin!

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    2. I love the restraint of this piece to explain, and the word choices, and the sparseness of it

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      1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

        Catherin, much appreciated. Glad it resonated for you.

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        1. lith is such a cool word!

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          1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

            I lith it altho ;)

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        2. I wrote a piece recently with lots of X words…but xenolith didn’t feature:

          eXtempore

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  3. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox says:

    Bravo, for your rock find and today’s quadrille

    much love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Gillena, thanks!

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  4. Cool photo! Love “to sift sugar sands”. Rock sifting would be fun.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks, Melissa. It is!

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  5. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    I love this Lisa – wonderful imagery – there is such joy and wonder discovering a rock or stone on the beach💕

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Yes! And for as long as I’ve been looking, no two are alike…

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