#FF — The Sinner

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The Sinner

I know perps always return to the scene of the crime. So why am I going back, knowing I could be seen? The anniversary is approaching. It’s busy with gill nets in certain seasons; this isn’t one of them. Only drunk and homeless frequent its cold shelter now, and they never talk.

I grunt as I heave the boulder aside.

Crayfish blast away. All that is left of her is bones and skin. I kneel in the rancid mud and pray over my transgressions. Over ending a beautiful life and then hiding my shame. One lake sturgeon closer to species extinction.

[101 words]

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17 Comments Add yours

  1. Oh that was a surprise ending! I liked the atmospherics of this

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thanks much, Neil :)

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  2. Yikes! Freaky stuff, Li! Cool story!

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  3. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    All lives are valuable. (K)

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  4. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    brilliant write Lisa – great twist – I had a look at the Lake sturgeon nearing extinction – like so many other species 😕

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Ange, thank you so much. Thanks for taking a look at their situation. I also read that in the US they are taking them off of the list. Really burns me up to know that. Some faceless committee decides who lives and who dies.

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  5. Great story, great twist, Li!! 💓

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you, Cindy :)

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  6. ceayr's avatar ceayr says:

    Fish are people too!

    Nice one, Li

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  7. Oh my, that’s good, Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      Thank you, Keith. I just read an openly-admitted-to-be-AI comment that suggested an edit. :::smh:::

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  8. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    i suppose one has to die so that another can live.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

      True, Plaridel, just not them. I can think of many others though who could fill the quota.

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