Meticulous
Henry keeps things exactly where they were when Marijo was still at home. Henry is not a neat person by nature, but he honors her this way. Marijo nursed their five children through fevers, stomach problems, rashes, and much more. It was her meticulous care that ensured they survived each calamity and reached adulthood.
When, one by one, all five moved far away, Marijo took a turn. Without her manufactured crises with the children and the doctor’s office on speed dial, Henry’s health plummeted. Blood tests revealed arsenic.
Commitment was easy. Henry visits her every Saturday. The children never write.
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Hi Lisa – it is you! I would like to try out some FF – is it possible to start posting- thank you – Jae
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Jae, absolutely it is possible. Go here:
https://rochellewisoff.com/2026/10/14/16-october-2026/ Look at the pic, include the pic with photographer credit under it at your post. Write your story on your block, and link it to Rochelle’s Mr. Linky page with the URL of your story. If you need any help along the way, let me know. Glad you want to give it a try. It’s a lot of fun.
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A truly encompassing story with a delicious twist in the ending – Jae
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I detest it every time I hear of a case of Munchausen’s syndrome by proxy. An insane need for attention by making yourself sick is one thing but hurting little kids is unforgiveable. There’s been too much of that going around lately.
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A very sad story for everyone. Great take, Lisa.
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