
If Thine Eyes…
Ronnie’s feet tremble twice a day.
A year ago…
Ronnie refuses to listen, to see; to feel.
But God won’t leave him alone.
Some consider relentless harassment of the senses as torture.
God doesn’t care; insists, 24/7.
Knitting needles in his ears make him pass out.
Lye in his eyes hurts like a muthafucka.
Setting himself aflame leaves tender nerve endings.
Three strikes and you’re in.
Ronnie feels safe in the psych ward. God leaves him alone.
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Ronnie is home now. God has mercy on him, visiting only at blue hour. The trembling is comforting. He listens; and feels.
[100 words]
blue hour: Blue Hour is the period just before sunrise and just after sunset when the sky takes on a deep blue hue, offering ideal lighting for photography and atmospheric views.
Note: studying the image, I see what looks like two eyes in the sky and the sun as a mouth.
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Oh… so spooky… that really hurts. Great take, Lisa 👍
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Tragedy made manifest. Thanks for reading, Yasan.
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Indeed 👍 You’re most welcome, Lisa. Enjoy your day! ☺️
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a terrible god, this one. Nicely done, Lisa
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