pink peonies perched
precariously presumed
pretty pickable
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This is perfect for peonies! 🙂
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An alliterative haiku? Why, I have never heard of such a thing! Now that I have read one, I am curious to try my hand at it!
Content-wise, lovely. I want peonies now!
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You do this poetry form such justice! Carefully and creatively crafted. Congratulations!
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thank you again! i like to write them
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