Fandango's One Word Challenge (FOWC), poetry, relationships, sedoka

Trap

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Fandango’s One Word Challenge today is trap.  Today’s offering is a sedoka .

The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

Trap

Arms, bodies entwined

Languishing abed mornings

Lived fantasies consume us

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Drained reality

Sated husks shuffle between

Ecstasy and scorched madness

 

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  1. Jordy's avatar Jordan says:
    November 24, 2018 at 3:21 pm

    Well done! Love the image too!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      November 24, 2018 at 4:08 pm

      thank you :)

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  2. The Muscleheaded Blog's avatar The Muscleheaded Blog says:
    November 29, 2018 at 2:42 am

    I enjoyed it – thanks !

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  3. FabFitFunFifty's avatar All About Life says:
    December 9, 2018 at 1:53 am

    Nicely penned and a very interesting take :O) x

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      December 9, 2018 at 2:21 am

      Thank you. It’s funny where the mind can take a person at times.

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      1. FabFitFunFifty's avatar All About Life says:
        December 9, 2018 at 2:37 am

        That’s very true; it does makes life interesting :O) x

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
          December 9, 2018 at 2:50 am

          :) indeed!

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