Fear invades rooted desire’s plexus
Trembling depths, soul’s tender nexus
Agony’s blow alters snow
Blue white ice, red blaze fire
To die – or to kill
Strong, just a word
Love, just me
Show me
Now
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The secret keeper’s weekly writing challenge #173, using the words: tremble, hit, desire, alter, depth. A synonym may be used for any of these words.
Today’s offering is a nonet: (9 – 8 – 7 – 6 – 5 – 4 – 3 – 2 – 1) progression downward of syllables
Wow. It believe it requires great effort.
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I love the mystical feeling of this write.
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Sometimes it’s scary to get real. Hoping that came across in it.
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Sure it is — self discovery should shake one to the foundations. 🙂
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Imagine a dog that has been kicked every time it walked towards the door. Then stand outside of the door and call it to come out. Poor comparison but I hope you understand what I mean. Just thought of walking out of the door shakes the dog to its foundations.
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I definitely get that.
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Great poem.
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thank you, Sadje 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Super article
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
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