dVerse — Quadrille — Two Sips

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“Soul Infusion” lithograph by Benjamin Creme

Mish is the host of dVerse tonight. Mish says:

It’s that time again to indulge in our very own dVerse creation, the “Quadrille”. For those of you who have not yet indulged, this is a poem of 44 words, not including the title. It must contain one given word.

Today at the pub, there shall be no guzzling allowed as I am offering you only a sip. Hope you are not thirsty. Yes, that is it. The quadrille word is “sip“.

Write a poem, any style of 44 words, not including the title. Include the word or derivative of the word, “sip”.

Please feel free to write a quadrille and submit it to dVerse! Follow the link above for more information on how to submit it.

I’ve done two, each very different:

Just a Sip

Joni Mitchell could drink a case of him and still be on her feet.

You, but a sip and I stagger.

Her old man is a singer in the park.

You let cosmic rhythms saturate you and bleed into me,

A winged soul infusion.

sippy cups

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we are friends

on the low table, your sippy cup and mine;

we, sitting cross legged on our matching rugs,

crunching graham crackers when we’re supposed to be sleeping

giggling over nothing of importance, shhh here comes teacher

unspoken that today and every day we are friends

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  1. Different but both joyful.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) thank you Jane

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  2. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    I like both of your poems, but the second one about friendship is precious!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Dwight. Glad you liked them especially the friendship one.

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  3. Glenn Buttkus's avatar Glenn Buttkus says:

    Joni Mitchell is my favorite songbird; even today as her voice is deeper from jazz, booze, and cigarettes.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      She’s one of my favorites. I did a post on her song Ladies of the Canyon on Sunday and ended up going to her web page. She needs help transcribing documents from interviews, etc. Once I get a free minute here I’m going to try to help her out.

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  4. Nicely contrasting pieces, but both about beautiful relationships. I like them together like this.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you Sarah, glad you like them together :)

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  5. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    The second one speaks of a great friendship – cheers!

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  6. Indeed, very different, and both great reads~

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Beverly!

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  7. I like both poems and their different takes on what people “sip” lol.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) glad you like them, Maria!

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  8. qbit's avatar qbit says:

    “Joni Mitchell could drink a case of him and still be on her feet.“ is a terrific line.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      That’s a line from one of her songs, modified to fit my poem. Yes, it is a terrific line :)

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  9. robtkistner's avatar robtkistner says:

    I love this, especially because you refer to Joni, and to one my of favorite of her albums – “Blue”!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks Rob, and I commandeered a few of her lines as well ;)

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  10. Mish's avatar Mish says:

    A contrast between the two, the second reminding me of what I experience every day at work., so I choose the first as my favourite! No offense intended. I especially like this….”You let cosmic rhythms saturate you and bleed into me”.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      So glad you connected with each in their own way. I applaud what you do for a living.

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      1. Mish's avatar Mish says:

        Thank you. I needed that today. :)

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          You are welcome :)

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  11. Both bring out the different sips relationships provide our lives. The second one is perfect with the picture.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Astrid. I searched for “two sippy cups on table” and couldn’t find just two, so I picked this one, which they certainly would be sipping from after their graham crackers. Glad you enjoyed them :)

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  12. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Both very different and both are great!

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome 😉

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  13. Such a contrast but beautifully expressed!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      thank you very much, Punam!

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      1. My pleasure, Li. ❤️

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  14. kim881's avatar kim881 says:

    I love the Joni references, Jade, and how you made them your own. Sometimes sippy cups are necessary, even when we are grown up! The second quadrille reminded me of infant school, where I first met my husband – only we didn’t have graham crackers!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Kim thank you for your kind comments and that is so touching to hear that you were reminded of those times back in infant school <3

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  15. Oh both are so good Lisa. Love them 🙂💕

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks Christine! Glad you did.

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  16. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice celebration of friendship “giggling over nothing of importance”.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Frank

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  17. pvcann's avatar pvcann says:

    I like both, and love the celebration/overcome/overflowing of the first and the humanity of the second.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, PVC, very kind of you and glad you like them.

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  18. Love them both… but the sweet one about friendship is great.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) glad you enjoyed them

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  19. ParTNerS iN CRiME
    SiPPinG No MaTTeR TiME
    DRinKinG DaNCinG Never Sipping Beer..:)

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  20. Lona Gynt's avatar Lona Gynt says:

    Makes me want to put on some jammies and sling some apple juice down with a sipping buddy 🙂 I am late to the quadrille trail again, but this was fun!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Lona so glad to see you and that you enjoyed the sippy cups. Are you going to pantoum?

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      1. Lona Gynt's avatar Lona Gynt says:

        I don’t know, life has been crazy, it felt good to just scratch out a quadrille, even late 🙂

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          OK going to check it out right now

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      2. Lona Gynt's avatar Lona Gynt says:

        I had wanted to ruby yacht, but lost my moorings hehe

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