Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 20 April 2019

 

Sarah is the host of Saturday Mix — Lucky Dip.  Sarah says:

Welcome to the Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip, 20 April 2019!
For this week’s Lucky Dip, I have reached into my mystery bag and pulled out a Synchronicity Poem. The topic is up to you!Good luck with your ‘Lucky Dip Synchronicity Poem’ – I can’t wait to see what you come up with! Don’t forget to tag ‘Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie’, ‘Saturday Mix’, and hashtag #LuckyDip

Feb 12

On Spring Mornings

Opening my eyes to sunshine
I can remember coffee’s taste
And sigh.

Morning sun paints gold on tulips
I bend, nose-deep, slippers dew-damp
Breathe in.

Cardinals, wrens, orioles high,
Hued treetops burst with many songs
I hear.

All colors and sizes of squirrel
Olympians who want birdseed
I laugh.

Pussy willow line long stems, they’re
Velvety soft against my cheek
I purr.

Spring peepers proclaim location
To mates – and listening herons
I’m torn.

I see you working the garden
Wishing you could see me also.
I weep.

My misty form fades along with
morning dew, longing to hold you
again.

 

9 Comments Add yours

  1. weejars says:

    Beautiful, and well written. Your twist at the end was subtle, yet evocative. Thanks for joining in the Saturday Mix 😊 I really enjoyed this poetry form!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you so much for your feedback, Sarah. Yes the form is a good one and I enjoyed it also.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Sadje says:

    A beautiful poem.

    Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome Li

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Jules says:

    Reminded me of the movie “Ghost”… https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghost_(1990_film)

    I can see the similarity… nature as it progresses. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      One of my favorite “romances.”

      Liked by 1 person

  4. memadtwo says:

    A lovely reverie. Great pacing. (K)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Kerfe.

      Liked by 1 person

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