#MM — Photo Challenge — Insomnia

68576969_2225338217705330_1980946802198708224_n– image by Julien Tabet

Like a wraith, in the night
Insomnia descends
Smell the stench of my blight
Foul visit never ends

Insomnia descends
Counted sheep attack me
Foul visit never ends
Dread is at an acme.

Counted sheep attack me
As wooly-bodied snakes
Dread is at an acme.
My frightened sleep escapes

As wooly-bodied snakes
They wrap around my brain
My frightened sleep escapes
Will I e’er rest again?

They wrap around my brain
Smell the stench of my blight
Will I e’er rest again?
Escape wraith in the night?

 

NEKNEERAJ is the host of Mindlovemisery Menagerie’s Photo Challenge.  Nekneeraj says:
Use above image as inspiration for a poem or short story.

Today’s offering is a pantoum form poem.

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  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Brilliant poem.

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  2. Shouldn’t that be Bread is at the Acme instead of Dread is at an acme?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      No, because Bread would put you to sleep and the poem is about insomnia. Maybe add a stanza at the end where the person put a Bread CD on and was able to sleep…

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  3. Carbs always make me sleepy.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Oh, I thought you were talking about the musical group with David Gates! lol Either works, I suppose.

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  4. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    My frightened sleep escapes…that’s a great line. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much. And I don’t suffer from insomnia :)

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  5. Carol anne's avatar Carol Anne says:

    brilliant poem! I can definitely relate to this one! Insomnia is awful for me on most nights!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks. Sorry you have insomnia, Carol :(

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