OctPoWriMo2019 — Day 7 — speaking in (mature audiences only)

Image result for tantalus painting

Tantalizing tongues
test us terribly to totter
from truth, tumbling
into torrential tastes
that in time will taunt.

 

 

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Languid laps of
luxurious liquid lines
lingering lusciously
on your lovely lips;
then la-la-la-la-la-la!

 

 

Gossip

Wagging waddlers
wander wickedly
willing wanderlust
wilting woestricken
ones, who wonder why.

 

 

Morgan Dragonwillow is the host (co-hosted today by Esther Jones) of OctPoWriMo.  Esther says:
Maybe you’d like to write about your first kiss. Or giving a speech. Or something else altogether. It’s up to you. It’s your tongue. Use it.

Word Prompts: Sweet Sour Bitter Broken Healing
Suggested Poetry Type: Tongue Twister
Image 1:  “Tantalus” by Julie Cross
image 2:  unnamed
Image 3:  “Gossip” by Jim Gray
Exploring poetry in all its forms.
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10 Comments Add yours

  1. Did your fingers cramp writing this? Amazing work, Li. 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 how did you know? Thanks, Punam.

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      1. Lol if your tongue cramped while reading mine, I guessed your fingers might have cramped writing this! 😉
        You are welcome.

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        1. msjadeli says:

          What I mean is I read it aloud and my tongue cramped it was so good with all of the twisting. ❤

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          1. Lol even mine did when I read it aloud! Thanks once again. ❤️

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  2. Beth Camp says:

    Wasn’t expecting this trio of poems, each one riffing on one aspect of a tongue/talk playing with a letter, sometimes intimate, sometimes sad. The first stanza makes me think how hard ‘truth’ is to achieve.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Beth. Yes it is, if it even exists in a “pure” form!

      Like

  3. memadtwo says:

    I like the first one especially and the illustration too. (K)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Kerfe.

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