For long she swam in pools of jade
But now her wings soar lilac skies
Twixt earth and sky in orange brocade
For long she swam in pools of jade
In shadows waits; she’s heaven-made
Transform from sleep! Awake! Arise!
For long she swam in pools of jade
But now her wings soar lilac skies!
Sadje is doing a trial run of “What do you see?” Helene’ used to be the giver of prompts for this challenge. I’m not sure I can do it every week, but I will try. Thank you, Sadje, for keeping this prompt challenge alive!
Today’s offering is a triolet form poem.
Nicely done, Li!
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Thank you, Magarisa 🙂
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My pleasure. 🙂
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This is a lovely poem Li. Thanks for joining in the prompt. I have shared it on my blog.
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Thank you, Sadje 🙂
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You’re welcome 😉
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“Pools of jade”
Lovely !
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🙂 Thanks
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You’re welcome 🎁
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The triolet has such a wonderful rhythm. You can feel the colors soar. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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I like to swim…flying in the sky is just a different swim 😉
Lovely…
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Yes, Jules, swimming in air 🙂
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Truly lovely! 💙 💜
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Thank you, Beckie, glad you enjoyed it.
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Wonderful poem, the colours really sing!
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Thanks Chris 🙂
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