#Haiki Challenge #113 — fallen leaves (ochiba)

Words fall in Autumn
like leaves, wet and fading —
an old man’s life ends.

 

The haiga was written in honor of Matsuo Basho, whose painting here inspired me, as the characters look like falling leaves.

Haiga is a Japanese concept for simple pictures combined with poetry, usually meaning haiku. In Basho’s time, haiga meant a brushed ink drawing combined with one of his single poems handwritten as part of the picture. … Sometimes the poem is handwritten or it can be computer generated, depending on the artist’s taste.

Image information:
Portrait of Matsuo Bashō by Yokoi Kinkoku, c. 1820. The calligraphy relates one of Bashō’s most famous haiku poems: Furu ike ya / kawazu tobikomu / mizu no oto (An old pond / a frog jumps in / the sound of water).

Frank J. Tassone is the host of Haiki Challenge.  Frank says:
This week, write the haikai poem of your choice (haiku, senryu, haibun, tanka, haiga, renga, etc.) that alludes to fallen leaves (ochiba)?

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  1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    Great poem Jade!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dwight, thank you very much.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Reena, thank you :)

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  2. Indira's avatar Indira says:

    Great poem. The picture really resembles a fallen leaf.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Indira, thank you :)

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      1. Indira's avatar Indira says:

        Most welcome, dear.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        A pleasure Li

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  3. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Wonderful tribute to Basho. Great imagery. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      K thanks. It was spontaneous. I was looking for def of haiga and saw the pic at wiki.

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  4. Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #2: Jade Li’s latest #haiga for my current #Haikai challenge!

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  5. This is lovely. And they do look like fallen leaves.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you, Linda.

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  6. Jules's avatar Jules says:

    I like how the word frog in Japanese also means returning.
    “Frog” in Japanese is “kaeru.” While the kanji/kana involved in writing the words are different, it is pronounced the same way you say “return/to return” (also “kaeru”). As it has been explained to me, frogs can be linked with things/or people returning to a place or origin.

    Thanks for the history of the image. I like how you interpret the characters/ calligraphy as falling leaves :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I so enjoy your Japanese lesson on the connections in language and meaning and am even more happy about the haiga now <3

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      1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

        …one of my collections is Frogs… Frogs are very lucky in many cultures. (breep!)

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I collect frogs also <3 Not sure why I started but they just drew me to them.

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          1. Jules's avatar Jules says:

            Positive Luck – that’s what I’m sticking with ;)

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  7. Carol anne's avatar Carol Anne says:

    thats so beautiful! A wonderful tribute to a wonderful man!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, the photo inspired me :)

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