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What do you see # 19 — To cross a bridge…

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To cross a bridge from light to dark
Can mean so many different things
From sure to doubt, from lush to stark
To cross a bridge from light to dark
May sell your soul to make your mark
Or face your fears in listened dreams
To cross a bridge from light to dark
Can mean so many different things  

 

Today’s offering is in the form of a triolet.

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  1. kittysverses's avatar kittysverses says:
    March 2, 2020 at 11:55 am

    Nice one, Li. :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 2, 2020 at 12:50 pm

      Thank you, Kitty :)

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      1. kittysverses's avatar kittysverses says:
        March 5, 2020 at 7:07 am

        You are welcome, Li. :)

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
    March 2, 2020 at 2:03 pm

    Great poem. It is true that crossing a bridge can mark very important era of our lives. Thanks Li for joining in the challenge.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 2, 2020 at 2:11 pm

      :) Thanks!

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
        March 2, 2020 at 2:29 pm

        You’re welcome

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  4. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged says:
    March 3, 2020 at 4:37 am

    Thought provoking and beautiful, Li. ❤️

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 3, 2020 at 10:35 am

      Thank you very much, Punam.

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      1. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged says:
        March 5, 2020 at 4:09 am

        You are welcome!

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  5. judeitakali's avatar judeitakali says:
    March 6, 2020 at 3:24 am

    love your take on this Jade, “cross a bridge from light to dark,” very intriguing

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 6, 2020 at 3:16 pm

      Thank you, Jude. Glad you found it intriguing.

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      1. judeitakali's avatar judeitakali says:
        March 7, 2020 at 5:20 am

        i did, and it’s my pleasure

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  7. cbialczak1971's avatar Stine Writing says:
    March 8, 2020 at 9:19 pm

    I love your use of repetition. This was really good.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 8, 2020 at 10:18 pm

      So glad you enjoyed the poem, thank you Stine :)

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  8. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:
    March 9, 2020 at 6:54 am

    Clever!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 9, 2020 at 1:01 pm

      Thanks Chris!

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