#MM — Saturday Mix — Cry from the darkness

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Cry from the Darkness

When all that is is up for profit
A call for prophet needs pierce the sky
Tortured, twisted souls will never rest
Until wrest from darkness by the light

 

 

 

Sarah Weejars is the host of Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie’s Saturday Mix.  Sarah says:
This week we are seeing double with ‘Double Take’The ‘Double Take’ challenge focuses on the use of homophones to build your writing piece. You have two sets of homophones and you are challenged to use all of them in your response – which can be poetry or prose. Our homophone sets this week are:
profit – money earned
prophet – seer
and
rest – stop working
wrest – take away

12 Comments Add yours

  1. Sadje says:

    What a powerful poem.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome Li

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Pradeep says:

    I am not good with poems. I liked this one, though.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, glad you like it. Sorry for late response found your comment in spam folder.

      Like

  3. badfinger20 says:

    Intense poem Lisa…and I love the song.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Max.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. badfinger20 says:

        Thank you Lisa…you have me reading poems…that is an achievement in itself.

        Liked by 1 person

        1. msjadeli says:

          🙂 Awesome!

          Liked by 1 person

  4. memadtwo says:

    Great use of the wordplay. Grace is such a potent word also. (K)

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Grace is the only way we’re going to get through this mess.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. memadtwo says:

        That’s true. Grace and mercy.

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