Tourists returned to the village of Hualong, after enduring five years of rigidly enforced international travel restrictions. Three years prior, laissez faire attitudes and practices had killed or disabled twenty million worldwide. The vaccine was developed from a tropical fungus that could be easily mass-produced.
Mae could hear them in her upper apartment over the incense boutique when the nurse opened the windows and she was awake. The droning hiss of the ventilator had been her only comforting lullaby for so long. It was good to hear the chatter of voices, even if she would never walk among them again.
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My story today is focused on what could be considered a fate worse than death from Covid-19. The MC was one of the first struck down by Covid-19 without being killed.
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the surf-loving vacationer of Friday Fictioneers.
I guess Mae developed some type of phobia to being around other people, and I hope that doesn’t happen to me.
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Mae is a victim of Covid-19 and will spend the rest of her life on a ventilator. As to your fears of being around other people, I feel the same way 😦
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That’s a fate worse than death indeed 😢
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Yes it would be, but not as bad as 8 years with only the sound of a ventilator…
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Poor Mae. I am glad she found some pleasure in hearing a change in the atmosphere outside. … Even without Covid-19, there are those whose lives are forever changed by stroke or accident or illness and who sometimes end up living behind walls where others don’t know their reality. Your story is a good reminder that there is much suffering we’re not aware of, and can get better at … for, even if Mae is on a ventilator, it does not mean others cannot come visit her and spend time with her …
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Thank you for your sensitive and informed comment, Na’ama.
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🙂 My pleasure .. and, thank YOU!
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I think it would be tragic to hear the sounds of life returning to normal and not be able to join the throngs
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This is a very poignant and current tale. I feel for her.
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Thank you, Gabriella. I do also.
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20 million and 5 years – sadly, it is heading that way. The toll on many is huge in many different ways. Good, if bleak story, well written.
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Thank you, Iain. Wishing it wasn’t this way 😦
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Very topical story Li.
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‘Fate worse than death’, indeed. Scarry. Very well written.
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Thank you much, Indira.
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My pleasure, dear. You write so well.
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🙂 ❤
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she should think positive and not lose hope.
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I’m sure she has a better chance to now. Maybe she’ll be able to heal and start being a part of life again.
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People are not really talking much about the lingering effects of this disease–we don’t even know what will show up later in chronic problems, maybe even for those without strong symptoms. “Normal” will be impossible for many. (K)
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😦 best not to think too much about it.
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Dear Lisa,
There are no promises with this plague, are there? Thoughtfully written piece. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle, thank you very much, no there aren’t. Welcome back from vaca!
Shalom,
Lisa
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Good story. Real life and how it can be.
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Thanks, Bill.
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You’re welcome.
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Life on a ventilator seems to me like death waiting to be unplugged. Chilling.
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It would be horrific, I’m sure. With the new sounds maybe she will find some respite.
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Frighteningly realistic story! I’m doing my best to avoid catching the virus but you can only do so much.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks for reading and your comment, Susan.
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If anything she has survived and also there is a very good reason for saving the tropical forests – if they hold the cure for all diseases.
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What an awful thing to happen to Mae – and I fear there will be many more like her thanks to the, as you say, laissez-faire attitude of so many governments, mine included.
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😦 yes and yes
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No telling what we are going to find out when this is finally over…if it ever is
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I wish this was just a dream and we would all wake up.
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Sometimes I’ll be looking at the window at work and cannot believe this…also looking at pictures 8 – 9 months ago and cannot believe it wasn’t around then.
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If it is one thing this experience is teaching me it is how much people NEED other people. I miss being among others. Before, when there was a choice, I controlled how much contact I had with others. That choice has been taken away from me. It’s not a good feeling.
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I agree. I’m not a people person and at first…I didn’t mind but after a month…I didn’t like it at all. So I know what you are talking about.
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What a sad place to be in. For many Polio once meant life in an iron lung. Good to see you writing.
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Yes, Mike, didn’t think about those poor souls. Thank you.
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Thank you for reading!
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To hear normality return but never be able to be part of it. Poor Mae.
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Yes 😦
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How sad. At least Mae is taking comfort in the sounds of others getting on with their lives.
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It’s better than what it was…
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This story is powerful and timely in subject matter.
I didn’t see where it was going until the end. Great take on the prompt.
Have a wonderful week … Be Safe
Isadora 😎
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Thank you, Isadora.
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Clear and powerful, and speaks to my worst fears!
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Thank you. Mine too!
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That’s terrifying. I’ve read a little about the long haulers who have persistent symptoms and speculation about lingering effects, but your story is heartbreaking and horrifying.
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Thanks. I wish it wasn’t a reality for many.
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Wow, this is deep. A lot of struggle here.
The description of the sound of the ventilator is heartbreakingly accurate.
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😦
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