Haikai Challenge #157: Autumn Equinox (Shunbun)

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Autumn Equinox’ Color Clock
Blue globe ticks a notch
Greens splash to orange and red
Yellow heat turns down

 

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Equinox Set Change
Blue mirrored ripples
Once framed with green are now brown
Swans swim a new pond

 

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Autumn Harvest
Hungry red squirrel
Pine nuts, sunflower seeds, pears
Wrens eat fat spiders

 

Images:
orange and red leaves
swans
red squirrel

Frank J. Tassone is the host of Haikai Challenge.  Frank says:
Write the haikai poem of your choice (haiku, senryu, haibun, tanka, haiga, renga, etc.) that alludes to the Autumn (Spring) equinox (shunbun).

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  1. s.s. says:

    Beautiful…love the clock in the picture

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      1. s.s. says:

        You’re welcome

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  2. gdutta17 says:

    Lovely Haiku..all three of them. If i had to make a choice, would say the “Autumn Equinox colour clock” is certainly the best. Love the line..”Green splash to orange and red”. 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much 🙂

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  3. Sadje says:

    What a lovely way to describe autumn

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Sadje. I saw the swans last week and a red squirrel yesterday that inspired two of them.

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome 😉

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  4. I love all that russet red imagery!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      I didn’t even notice, but yes! Thanks Jane 🙂

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  5. Jules says:

    I’ve got grey squirrels. But I did see black ones in Canada… and further north. Haven’t seen a red one in a long time.

    Lovely verses.

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Jules. I think this place must be the epicenter of squirreldom.

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  6. memadtwo says:

    Great use of colors. (K)

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you! Ironically it’s still all green around here.

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      1. memadtwo says:

        It is here too, but I can feel the changes, especially with the light.

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  7. Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #7: Jade Li’s latest photo #haiku #sequence for my current #Haikai Challenge!

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  8. I didn’t need the photos to appreciate your beautiful imagery Lisa. Lovely! ☺️💕

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thank you!

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  9. Lovely haiku to share the changing of the seasons. Great photographs, as well! I have a good friend who lives in Michigan. He said they have their heat on already. Meanwhile, in Arizona, it will be around 100 F. today. LOL! ❤

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Colleen. Yes, it’s getting a bit nippy at night. Amazing it is still so hot in AZ!

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      1. We will start to cool down in October. I’m jealous of your cooler weather and fall color! 😀

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  10. I really like these, especially the part about greens splashing, 🙂

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 So happy you do, thanks!

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  11. jazzytower says:

    Especially loved the last one😊

    Pat

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