#FF — Fall Adventure


PHOTO PROMPT © Susan Eames

By fall of 2021, the pandemic is gasping its last. Everything fun was back on the table.

Bart pushed himself away from the keyboard with a satisfied grin.

Honey, you’ll never guess where we’re going for our anniversary.”

On December tenth, they were riding a snow tractor to the lodge at the top of the mountain.

Bart, I knew there was a good reason why I married you. You promised grand adventure and here we are.”

Marnie and Bart snuggled close in their parkas.

Their first– and anniversary – day snow-shoeing, Marnie slipped and fell down the mountain.

Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the longstanding host of Friday Fictioneers.

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  1. That reminds me of the guy who ,…….much lesser version of it though….. after coming home from the military during wartime, gets hit by truck or stray bullet

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes, I can see the similarities!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Damaged but still alive!

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  2. Neil MacDonald's avatar neilmacdon says:

    Sadly, when we beat the pandemic, we wont’ be immune to stupditity, carelessness and accidents

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Too true, Neil. She can sit by the fire now and drink warm toddies.

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  3. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly says:

    There will be a lot of ‘survived the pandemic only to…’ stories in 2021! Funny, in a twisted way.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      lol yes and yes

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  4. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug says:

    Safety is relative. Right now, my priority is to not get the Rona in the few months before the vaccine is widely available. We’re in the middle of a spike right after the announcement of three vaccines.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Oh boy, I hadn’t heard we were spiking after seeing a light of hope. It figures. Seeing your “Rona” I just thought of something. I think it is time for Weird Al to do a parody on My Sharona.

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      1. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug says:

        I’ve heard for months as soon as the cold weather hit, we were in for another spike. There have been a lot of gatherings around the election and now holiday gatherings and travel. I read today, we may have to wear masks for another year because people who refuse to wear masks are perpetuating spreading.

        When I first heard about the corona virus, I started singing, “M-m-m-my corona.” I saw later that somebody did a full parody. It wasn’t Weird Al, but you can probably find it on YouTube.

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        1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

          I’ll go try to find it, thanks!

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  5. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Theres always a new challenge right around the corner… (k)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Amen. When this is all over I feel like going out and making a spectacular mistake.

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  6. Fandango's avatar Fandango says:

    Ooh. I guess leaving home after nearly two years of quarantining does have its risks.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) I bet if you asked her she would say it was worth every bit of what happened. A funny story to tell later…

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      1. Fandango's avatar Fandango says:

        I’m looking forward to it!

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  7. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 (Max) says:

    I couldn’t help but laugh my black humor laugh! If that is not like life nothing is!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      LOL I hear you!

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  8. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    did she survive? i hope for a happy ending.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Well if that is her foot in the cast in the hospital, I would say yes. She may never go snow-shoeing again, but… I hope she takes up a safer hobby and is happy with it also. Thank you for reading and your comment, Plaridel.

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  9. I hope he didn’t get tired of her during the lockdown and planned to bump her off.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      LOL That would have been a wonderful twist (pun intended.) Next time ;)

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  10. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Sometimes grand adventures end in tragedies.

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  11. draliman's avatar draliman says:

    Ouch. At least she doesn’t seem to be too badly injured :-)

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  12. It was all going so well! Oh dear, what a shame, never mind!

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  13. Oh no, poor thing. She was so happy before as well.

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  14. Oops! Well at least it happened while she was enjoying herself!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  15. Michael Humphris's avatar Michael Humphris says:

    At least they will have more time for snuggling down

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Good point! :)

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  16. Dear Lisa,

    No doubt they’ll be telling this story for many anniversaries to come. ;) Cute story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Rochelle, ha ha, I’m sure they will. Thank you.
      Shalom,
      Lisa

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  17. Oh that’s too bad. Hopefully it was just her ankle that was hurt. Good story Ms. Jadeli.

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  18. It was such a sweet visual until he fell down the mountains.
    But, I enjoyed the build up. Now, you’ll have to coninute the story. : )
    Have a great weekend … Be Safe
    Isadora 😎

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you and glad you liked the story, Isadora :)

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  19. jwdwrites's avatar jwdwrites says:

    I hope that was all she broke.

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  20. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan says:

    Poor Marnie, she seems to have got careless or was she pushed?

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Good question, James!

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  21. granonine's avatar granonine says:

    Oh good grief! What a shock, and a lousy way for Marnie to end her great adventure and her life!

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    1. granonine's avatar granonine says:

      Well, apparently not her life, or she wouldn’t be sitting there with her toenails all red and shiny :)

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      1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

        Exactly, Linda :)

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    2. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Linda, it was a terrible accident but I think (hope!?) she survived :)

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  22. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Nothing worse than planning a great adventure and having an accident come in and foil the plans! (I refuse to think there was anything nefarious going on)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I think it was a simple accident also. Thank you for reading and commenting, Dale.

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  23. ahtdoucette's avatar ahtdoucette says:

    Grand adventure! Be careful what you ask for. Reminds of the old blessing and curse: may your life be interesting. :-) On the bright side, at least they will always have each other!

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  24. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell says:

    Oh nooooooo! What an end to a lovely escape! Nicely told with ups and downs all over !

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Laurie :)

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  25. Sonia Dogra's avatar soniadogra says:

    Awww…What an adventure!

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