Light slides forever
down your silky thigh, launchpad
for erotic flight.
Warm milk calls pussy away
as angled skin joins in play.
This may be my first erotic tanka! Great photo to write to for a cold February afternoon.
Shay is today’s host of The Sunday Muse.
Tao Talk 
Nice!
–Fireblossom
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Thank you :)
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Good writing, Lisa. You nailed the prompt, for sure! Nicely crafted!
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Glad you enjoyed the poem, Susan, thank you :)
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You’re very welcome. Thank you for sharing!
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Ooooooooh, this is delicious!
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:) Thanks, Helen.
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Wow very sensuous Jade. Happy Sunday. Thanks for dropping by my blog today
Much💗love
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Thanks, Gillena!
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This is the most delicious tanka I have ever read! Evocative and wonderful writing Lisa!!
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Carrie, thank you :)
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The world needs more erotic Tankas like these!
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Thank you very much :)
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Nice on the new attempt. Yes, I think it stayed erotic, I liked the angled thigh. I hope you will forgive me today, I was practicing writing, bad job though, Gothic Fiction Poetry.
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Thank you, Jim, I liked your Gothic Fiction Poetry offering this week.
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Erotic is what the promot called for…(k)
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:)
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Wow! 🌞
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:)
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Erotic indeed. Nice work!
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Thanks, Beverly!
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You caught the scene and the mood!
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:)
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Nicely written… as I discovered after finally discovering there was something on the page besides the photo, LOL.
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LOL Dave. I am still agonizing over whether the light should have slid down her thigh or crept up ;) Here I felt the light was more fluid and so obeyed the laws of gravity.
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