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earthweal OLW 62 — Spring Springs!

Posted by Lisa or Li on

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spring springs gates of heaven
nimble cats climb on trees
sun smiles dark unleavened
rose dance with honey bees

nimble cats climb on trees
blue jays laugh, jump away
rose dance with honey bees
windchimes tinkle and play

blue jays laugh, jump away
spring springs gates of heaven
windchimes tinkle and play
sun smiles dark unleavened

I just found this pantoum generator online (thanks Denise DeVries!) and decided to try it out.

Note:  I never let my cats outside to climb on trees, even though they are both very nimble.

image link here

Brendan is the host of earthweal’s open link weekend.

 

17 Comments Add yours

  1. Sherry Marr's avatar Sherry Marr says:
    March 27, 2021 at 8:16 pm

    I love your poem, so full of life, and the wonderful painting of the fox……..so beautiful………

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 27, 2021 at 9:46 pm

      Thanks, Sherry!

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  2. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:
    March 27, 2021 at 10:28 pm

    What great images! I saw a blue jay just like that on my walk this morning. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 28, 2021 at 7:11 pm

      :) Thank you and most cool.

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  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
    March 27, 2021 at 10:36 pm

    Love the flow of this poem. Lovely.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 28, 2021 at 7:13 pm

      Thank you. This form generator works like a charm.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
        March 28, 2021 at 9:23 pm

        You’re welcome 😉

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  4. earthweal's avatar earthweal says:
    March 28, 2021 at 5:31 am

    Such sprung joy in this springtide poem. Lovely. – Brendan

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 28, 2021 at 7:17 pm

      Thanks, Brendan!

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  5. Ingrid's avatar Ingrid says:
    March 28, 2021 at 9:32 am

    This really made me smile with all its jingling lightness. In spite of all the darkness, there are still reasons to rejoice!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 28, 2021 at 7:55 pm

      Thank you very much, Ingrid!

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  6. Home Study from the Grateful Heart's avatar Home Study from the Grateful Heart says:
    March 28, 2021 at 6:05 pm

    Love this!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 28, 2021 at 8:06 pm

      Thank you :)

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  7. Home Study from the Grateful Heart's avatar Home Study from the Grateful Heart says:
    March 28, 2021 at 8:08 pm

    You’re welcome 🙂

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  8. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 (Max) says:
    March 29, 2021 at 11:50 pm

    The writing went perfect with the image…I do have spring fever.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:
      March 30, 2021 at 1:52 am

      I HEAR YOU. It’s been so cold the last couple of days and cloudy.

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 (Max) says:
        March 30, 2021 at 10:29 am

        I woke up yesterday freezing and had to get the jacket again…I’m ready for the sunshine.

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