The Sunday Muse 160 — Good Time

July’s spell wrote itself nut brown
on her sweat-kissed back.

They said sometime after noon.

Fondling the warm iron gatepost,
her thick, hungry thighs arrived
at 11.

He stumbled out, pale and squinting,
open palm arched over his head,
itching for a shower.

Hey, loverboy, remember me?”

For a man released early for good time,
he was about to be very very bad.

 

Shay is today’s host of The Sunday Muse.

24 Comments Add yours

  1. Susie Clevenger's avatar Susie Clevenger says:

    Oh my…gonna get hot…love your take on the prompt!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thanks, Susie!

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  2. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen Dehner says:

    Talk about wonderfully naughty ~~~ this is a great write!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Many thanks, Helen :)

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  3. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    amazing! I love it! <3

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  4. kaykuala h's avatar kaykuala h says:

    For a man released early for good time,
    he was about to be very very bad.

    Cannot really be sure what will be his next move. Good close Jade, leaving it mysteriously open at the end!

    Hank

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much and glad you enjoyed the poem :)

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  5. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 (Max) says:

    It’s getting warm in here lol…. Love the song! I needed that today.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      LOL :) Glad it gave you the jolt you needed.

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  6. coalblack's avatar coalblack says:

    She’s gonna burn that boy to the ground! Love it, and the song.

    Shay/Fireblossom

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      YES! Thanks, Shay!

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  7. wyndolynne's avatar wyndolynne says:

    whew! scorching poem!

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  8. hedgewitch's avatar hedgewitch says:

    Vivid and full of great imagery.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you :)

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  9. Carrie V. H.'s avatar Carrie V. H. says:

    Such a flaming hot take on the image Lisa! 🔥

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Carrie!

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  10. qbit's avatar qbit says:

    “July’s spell wrote itself nut brown” – perfection.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you!

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  11. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Surprise! (K)

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  12. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford says:

    Well now, this is risky — or is it risque? Whichever, it’s great fun.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      It’s whatever you want it to be, Beverly. So glad you enjoyed it, thank you :)

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