The Sunday Muse 160 — Good Time

July’s spell wrote itself nut brown
on her sweat-kissed back.

They said sometime after noon.

Fondling the warm iron gatepost,
her thick, hungry thighs arrived
at 11.

He stumbled out, pale and squinting,
open palm arched over his head,
itching for a shower.

Hey, loverboy, remember me?”

For a man released early for good time,
he was about to be very very bad.

 

Shay is today’s host of The Sunday Muse.

24 Comments Add yours

  1. Susie Clevenger says:

    Oh my…gonna get hot…love your take on the prompt!

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    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thanks, Susie!

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  2. Helen Dehner says:

    Talk about wonderfully naughty ~~~ this is a great write!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Many thanks, Helen 🙂

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  3. Carol anne says:

    amazing! I love it! ❤

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  4. kaykuala h says:

    For a man released early for good time,
    he was about to be very very bad.

    Cannot really be sure what will be his next move. Good close Jade, leaving it mysteriously open at the end!

    Hank

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    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much and glad you enjoyed the poem 🙂

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  5. badfinger20 (Max) says:

    It’s getting warm in here lol…. Love the song! I needed that today.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      LOL 🙂 Glad it gave you the jolt you needed.

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  6. coalblack says:

    She’s gonna burn that boy to the ground! Love it, and the song.

    Shay/Fireblossom

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      YES! Thanks, Shay!

      Like

  7. wyndolynne says:

    whew! scorching poem!

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  8. hedgewitch says:

    Vivid and full of great imagery.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thank you 🙂

      Like

  9. Carrie V. H. says:

    Such a flaming hot take on the image Lisa! 🔥

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      Thanks, Carrie!

      Like

  10. qbit says:

    “July’s spell wrote itself nut brown” – perfection.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      🙂 Thank you!

      Like

  11. memadtwo says:

    Surprise! (K)

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Beverly Crawford says:

    Well now, this is risky — or is it risque? Whichever, it’s great fun.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. msjadeli says:

      It’s whatever you want it to be, Beverly. So glad you enjoyed it, thank you 🙂

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