TSM 166 — Winged Messenger


She plays moon star sky-chase
’til dawn, then coyote drinks deep.
Her wise open eyes close
to yellow pools in otherworldly
realms; her work begins
as spirit wings wait for her.

Carrie is today’s host of The Sunday Muse.

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  1. Carrie V. H.'s avatar Carrie V. H. says:

    This is absolutely lovely poetry Lisa, and I love the Joni Mitchell song too!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Carrie, many thanks. So glad you love the song :)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Jen :)

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      1. Jen's avatar Jen Goldie says:

        My pleasure 😊

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  2. Sherry Marr's avatar Sherry Marr says:

    I love “her work begins as spirit wings wait for her.”

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sherry, thank you.

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  3. Mark S's avatar Mark S says:

    Wonderful! And can I say the photo is pretty awesome.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes it is an awesome photo, the one provided by The Sunday Muse. Thank you, Mark :)

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  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    I love your poem Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      :) Thank you! I loved the picture and it looks like wings in the water, which inspired me.

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        You’re welcome ☺️

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  5. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 (Max) says:

    Great job Lisa. Great song to add to it.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      I thought it was time the coyote was a female :) Thank you, Max.

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      1. Badfinger (Max)'s avatar badfinger20 (Max) says:

        LOL…sounds good to me.

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  6. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    This has a mystical vibe to it, let the spiritual wings take flight. Wonderful take on the prompt.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much, Truedessa :)

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  7. Very enchanting lines, Li!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Shweta thank you, my friend :)

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      1. You’re very welcome 🙂

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  8. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    I grew up on a farm and slept on the screened in front porch. Those howling coyotes sang me to sleep. Thanks for stirring my memories of them. BTW, one of my shows was to make sure all our free range chickens were locked in the chicken house at night. Invariably the coyotes would find those sleeping outside.
    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Growing up on a farm put you close to all life not just the humans. I can imagine chickens are easy pickins at night for coyotes. Don’t chickens sometimes roost in the trees to stay safe? (Just what I read.)

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  9. Jim's avatar Jim says:

    google spell changed my word “chores” to “shows”. Sorry, google only THINKS it is smart on my smart phone .
    ..

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Ah! I wondered if you had a podcast or something!

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  10. I love the ‘She plays moon star sky-chase’ – and perhaps just that one song of Joni Mitchell

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  11. wyndolynne's avatar wyndolynne says:

    Beautiful! Love the idea of the coyote drifting to rest as the day dawns.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you very much and glad you connected with the poem :)

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  12. Beverly Crawford's avatar Beverly Crawford says:

    I love the term “spirit wings”. Beautiful poem.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Beverly! I usually think of the owl with spirit wings but why not a coyote :)

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  13. Jinksy's avatar Jinksy says:

    An enjoyable offering, for this week’s Muse. Thanks.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      My pleasure, JInksy, thanks!

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  14. coalblack's avatar coalblack says:

    I like the tone you’ve struck with this one!

    –Shay

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Shay. The photo is so mystical looking I was inspired.

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  15. gillena's avatar gillena says:

    Water to quench and dreams to lift his spirit. Nice one
    Happy Sunday

    Much💛love

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Indeed! Thanks for your comment, Gillena.

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  16. writingwhatnots's avatar writingwhatnots says:

    I love your sagacious and mystical coyote.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Many thanks, Marion!

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  17. qbit's avatar qbit says:

    “She plays moon star sky-chase” – love that line!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks, q! I wanted to balance her play with her work after looking at coyote symbolism.

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  18. Syl's avatar Syl says:

    ‘Her work begins as spirit wings wait for her’
    The wolf as spirit guide is very powerful!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      The little lady in my poem is a coyote, and she brings messages back from the spirit world. Thank you very much for reading and commenting, Syl.

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  19. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Spirit wings…don’t we all wish for them. (K)

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  20. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen Dehner says:

    Spirit wings. What a lovely thought …. an exquisite write, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Helen, thank you! Glad you like that thought.

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  21. Susie Clevenger's avatar Susie Clevenger says:

    I love the spiritual mystery of this piece.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Susie.

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