PHOTO PROMPT © Russell Gayer
“Albert?,” says Anna.
I look at Anna’s face to see an expression somewhere between confusion and fear.
Albert is a name I’ve heard Anna say many times when she’s decompressing after an especially trying day. Della, her boss, keeps her cousin, Albert, on the payroll more out of guilt than anything. His obsessions drive him to bend all cubicle ears.
How did Albert know where they would be?
We stand without speaking and approach the front desk. Police arrive and question the suspect. They find Albert’s van parked in the service area with duct tape, zip-ties, syringes, and knife.
[100 words]
This is part 2, concluding the cliffhanger from last week.
Rochelle Wisoff-Fields is the artistic host of Friday Fictioneers.
Sounds like Alberet has hard-to-meet needs. Best to turn him down
LikeLiked by 1 person
Anna needs to get a restraining order against Albert asap. Depending on how he obtained the information of Anna’s whereabouts, and if the restraining order goes into effect, Della may have to fire her cousin (with a good reason to give her guilt-tripping family!)
LikeLiked by 2 people
Sounds like that’s what’s best for Anna. Great story, Li!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Shweta. Yes!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very intriguing story Li
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sadje!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome my friend
LikeLiked by 1 person
Every woman’s worse nightmare. I didn’t expect this conclusion to the story!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes! I didn’t either, until I saw this week’s image. Thanks for reading and commenting, Tannille.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sounds like Della’s loyalty may have been misplaced.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes. Hoping this spurs her to the realization. Thank you for reading and your comment, Sandra.
LikeLike
Wow! Hope the police looked at the evidence in Albert’s van and arrested him! The stuff of nightmares — women’s nightmares! Shivers!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I hope so also, but what real crime has he committed? Maybe enough to get a judge to approve a restraining order, but often something terrible has to happen to stop these maniacs. Thank you for reading and your comment, Lorraine.
LikeLike
Ouch! Let’s hope the cops take them seriously. You managed to bring the fear and terror to the reader very well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Gah, thank you. I hope they do also. I think Albert needs serious mental health assessment and intervention — and monitoring — at minimum if they don’t have enough to arrest him. Maybe an involuntary commitment. All stuff judge has to approve, and often they aren’t inclined to do so without hard, i.e. actual harm evidence.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Obsessive behavior is dangerous…he needs help, but given the world we live in, probably won’t get the proper kind. (K)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Exactly, Kerfe. Our system for dealing with human feelings and behaviors is broken.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It is. I wonder if it’s even repairable or if we just need to start over.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sounds like a Kavorkian scenario here.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I was thinking more Bundian 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh yes he works too. I love Ghost Adventures and I remember that Zack Bagans has Khavorkian’s Suicide van your tale reminded me of that.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haven’t read/seen it, thank you 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Its a TV ghost hunt show. Good fun if you like that stuff.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Not the direction I expected the story to take! Well done.
Here’s mine!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Glad to have surprised you, Keith. Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Caution and fear are the proper emotions here!
LikeLiked by 1 person
For sure, Dale. I don’t think things are wrapped up with this situation by a long shot. Thanks for reading and your comment.
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s for sure.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think I don’t like Albert …
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ditto!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dear Lisa,
Time for Anna to get outta Dodge. Albert is baaaaad news. Good story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
LikeLiked by 1 person
Rochelle, thank you. I hope it’s Albert that’s “taken out” instead of Anna. Yes he is a menace to society.
Shalom,
Lisa
LikeLike
he needs a good lawyer to get him out of this mess. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
We’ll see!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Chilling! Well done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
Nice one. Albert just wants a hug.
Much easier to stab a person in the back that way.
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂 I think you are right! Thank you, Subroto.
LikeLike
Well, that was unexpected. But glad he was found out!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes! Thanks for reading and commenting, Sascha.
LikeLike
Yikes. Not only obsessed but he has all the kit to go further… 😮
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hoping he gets the intervention that he needs.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I hope Anna survived… I can’t tell though because it’s a little ambiguous.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I hope so too!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sounds like something needs to be done about Albert quickly, before matters get out of hand.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Indeed! Let’s hope “the system” does what it’s intended to do…
LikeLike
I know how to meet Albert’s needs. Toss him in a cell and never let him out! One wonders how many victims have passed through his evil hands.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Linda, I tend to agree with you! I watched a Nova special last night talking about places that do personal dna testing and they showed two situations where cold cases were solved using the “joined database” (forgot the name of it.) One guy had killed 13 and raped over 50 (that they know of!) It wasn’t until a distant relative got hers into the database that they were able to track down the person.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Statistics show quite clearly that this kind of criminal doesn’t stop. He has to BE stopped.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes he does! I say get the judge to have him involuntarily committed and assessed and in the meantime try to get a search warrant on his house.
Like
Yup. I think he has lots of secrets.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’ve made a clever link between the decrepit state of the vehicle and the moral/mental state of Albert.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Penny thank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
That is scary! I hope he goes to prison. Prison sounds good and much-deserved.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Anne I’m 100% in agreement; he can get his treatment while in prison.
LikeLike
Ooooooo Albert is not simply the annoying cousin it seems.
LikeLiked by 1 person