dVerse — Quadrille 150 — Final Farewell

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Her living lingered,
her funeral brief;
children scattered,
peers long gone home.

Ghosts’ welcomes
await her release
from the bronze urn.

She’s sprinkled along
Spring thunderstorm’s
wake, towards the lake.

April sun’s comfort
warms as it dries;
her chalky residue
remains, her final farewell.

De Jackson, aka whimsygizmo, is today’s host for dVerse’ Quadrille Monday. De says:
Just chalk us a poem of precisely 44 words (not counting the title), including some form of the word chalk. Link it up by clicking Mr. Linky below. The prompt is open for the whole week, so remember to come back and read (and write!) some more!

31 Comments Add yours

  1. De Jackson's avatar De Jackson says:

    Goodness, Lisa. How is this so breathtakingly beautiful, when the content is so sad? Well done.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, De.

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  2. Xan's avatar Xan says:

    “Her living lingered,
    her funeral brief;”

    Such a succinct start–I knew immediately what the image was. Beautiful wordsmithing.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Alexandra.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Na’ama <3

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  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Great take Li.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Sadje, thank you <3

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

        My pleasure Li

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  4. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

    A most interesting take on the prompt, Lisa. I love what you have done with this.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Dwight, thanks much, my friend.

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      1. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome, Lisa!

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  5. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:

    Dust to dust. That lingering is so hard. (K)

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Yes it is. One day at a time…

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  6. Grace's avatar Grace says:

    A gentle final farewell.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Grace, thank you.

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  7. ‘her chalky residue
    remains,’ ~ a great write Lisa!

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, Carol.

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  8. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa says:

    Her chalky residue….chalk dust… beautiful done yet deeply sad.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Truedessa, thank you.

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  9. So tender and beautiful, Lisa.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Marion, thank you.

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  10. poignant and powerful, Lisa… I feel humbled.

    <3
    David

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thank you, dear David.

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  11. hdwoonie23's avatar Helen says:

    A wonderful poem you gifted us !! Her chalky residue, dust to dust, sigh.

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Helen, thank you very much.

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  12. Exquisite! What better destination than to become one with the universe? <3

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    1. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli says:

      Thanks much, Cheryl. Indeed!

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